April 10, 2023
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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
I heard that rhinos are being killed by poachers at the rate of one a day now. I don't understand why rhino and elephant horns are traded at such high prices. They are of no use to me even if I had them. It just makes you look like a egotistical self-absorbed narcissist. At least use expensive watches and luxury cars to ego trip. Don't ego trip by killing living creatures. It is the same as killing a person, buying his bones at a high price, and displaying them in your room to show off. Also, people who use it like traditional medicine are crazy. Use ordinary medicine. Believe in current science. If you die from it, it is your fate. It has no power to cure you. Don't kill living things in vain.
5
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.
Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.
🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
I heard that rhinos are being killed by poachers at the rate of one a day now.
I don't understand why rhino and elephant horns are traded at such high prices.
They are of no use to me even if I had them.
It just makes you look like an egotistical self-absorbed narcissist.
賛成しました。
We use "a" with nouns and adjectives which start with vowels.
At least use expensive watches and luxury cars to ego trip.
また、
At least use expensive watches and luxury cars for an ego trip.
Don't ego trip by killing living creatures.
また、
Don't go on an ego trip by killing living creatures.
It is the same as killing a person, buying his bones at a high price, and displaying them in your room to show off.
Also, people who use it like traditional medicine are crazy.
Use ordinary medicine.
Believe in current science.
If you die from it, it is your fate.
また、
If you die from it, you deserve it.
It has no power to cure you.
Don't kill living things in vain.
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April 13, 2023
ありがとうございます！！🙇♂️
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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I heard that rhinos are being killed by poachers at the rate of one a day now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't understand why rhino and elephant horns are traded at such high prices. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are of no use to me even if I had them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It just makes you look like a egotistical self-absorbed narcissist. It just makes you look like an egotistical self-absorbed narcissist. 賛成しました。 We use "a" with nouns and adjectives which start with vowels. |
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At least use expensive watches and luxury cars to ego trip. At least use expensive watches and luxury cars to ego trip. また、 At least use expensive watches and luxury cars for an ego trip. |
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Don't ego trip by killing living creatures. Don't ego trip by killing living creatures. また、 Don't go on an ego trip by killing living creatures. |
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It is the same as killing a person, buying his bones at a high price, and displaying them in your room to show off. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Also, people who use it like traditional medicine are crazy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Use ordinary medicine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Believe in current science. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you die from it, it is your fate. If you die from it, it is your fate. また、 If you die from it, you deserve it. |
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It has no power to cure you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Don't kill living things in vain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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