Jan. 29, 2021
A Deer
Today's morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't come out of the bathroom. After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters, and released in a mountain. I'm glad there was no injured person.
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Today'his morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't come out of the bathroom.
This morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't come out of the bathroom.
After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters, and released inear a mountain.
After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters, and released near a mountain.
I'm glad therno one was no injured person.
I'm glad no one was injured.
Today'his morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't comeget out of the bathroom.
This morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't get out of the bathroom.
"get out" is much more active/escape than "come out", which generally seems much slower, on his own terms.
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I'd be interested in more description as to WHY the deer couldn't get out... I'm on the edge of my seat here.
Feb. 2, 2021
Thank you for your correction! This is maybe because the doors of the toilet were doors that opened inward, so the deer couldn't pull and open the door from the inside.
A Deer
Today'his morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't come out of the bathroom.
This morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't come out of the bathroom.
After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters, and released in a mountain.
After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters and released in a mountain.
Because "released in a mountain" is a dependent clause, you don't use a comma before "and".
I'm glad there wasere no injured personople.
I'm glad there were no injured people.
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Today's morning, a deer got lost in a high school and couldn't come out of the bathroom.
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After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters, and released in a mountain.
After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters Because "released in a mountain" is a dependent clause, you don't use a comma before "and".
After three hours, the deer was captured by police and hunters, and released |
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I'm glad there was no injured person.
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