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Sept. 8, 2024

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I Want to Drink a Coke Float.

I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing. 🫠
I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.
I planned to make a coke float, but I opened the freezer there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I thought it was vanilla... What a day! 🫠


コーラフロートが飲みたい

今日はやろうと決めたことが2つあったけど、結局やらなかった🫠
特に予定がなくて、若い時にはまっていたYouTubeの動画を観た。
コーラフロートを作ろうと思っていたのに冷凍庫を開けたらバタークッキー&クリームチーズ味のアイスクリームがあった。バニラだと思っていた…。なんて日だ!🫠

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Sept. 16, 2024

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Sept. 16, 2024

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I Want to Drink a Coke Float.

I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.

🫠 I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.

I thought it was vanilla... What a day!

🫠

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Sept. 16, 2024

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I Want to Drink a Coke Float.


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I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.


I had two things that I decidwanted to do today, but I ended up doing nothing. I had two things that I wanted to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.

Your original sentence is perfect but using "wanted" is what a native would say.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had two things that I decided to do today, but I ended up doing nothing. I had two things to do today, but I ended up doing nothing.

🫠 I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.


🫠 I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young. 🫠 I didn't have any plans and watched YouTube videos that I was really into when I was young.

This also reads perfect. But I wonder if you wanted to communicate that you watched a YouTuber (a person), or a YouTube channel that you liked when you were younger. The current sentence suggests you were watching the *same* videos that you watched in the past. Alternatives: "I didn't have any plans and watched some videos on a YouTube channel that I was really into when I was young" "I didn't have any plans and watched some videos by a YouTuber that I was really into when I was younger"

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I planned to make a coke float, but I opened the freezer there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.


I had planned to make a cCoke float, but I opened the freezer and there was aonly butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I had planned to make a Coke float, but I opened the freezer and there was only butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.

I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer, there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer, there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.

I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer there was a butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream. I planned to make a coke float, but when I opened the freezer there was butter cookies and cream cheese ice cream.

I thought it was vanilla... What a day!


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I thought it wasI had vanilla... What a day! I thought I had vanilla... What a day!

🫠


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