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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and habits in five different Australian cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
Overall, it was evidence that going to a coffee was the most common habit, except in Adelaide. Additionally, the percentage of people buying instant coffee was always higher than that of those purchasing fresh coffee.
In terms of Sydney and Melbourne, while the proportion of Sydney people (2) who drank coffee or tea at a coffee was around 60%, this figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at approximately 63%.
Turning to the remaining cities, going to a coffee in Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of residents, at just over 60%, followed by Brisban and Adelaide, with the respective figures around 40% and 55%. By comparison, nearly 50% of citizens in Adelaide had a habit of buying instant coffee, compared to approximately 53% of those in Brisban and Hobart. The proportion of people who chose to purchase fresh coffee in Hobart was nearly 40%, which was 7% higher than this figure in Brisban and Adelaide, at roughly 33%.

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Additionally, the percentage of people buying instant coffee was always higher than that of those purchasing fresh coffee.

By comparison, nearly 50% of citizens in Adelaide had a habit of buying instant coffee, compared to approximately 53% of those in Brisban and Hobart.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and habits in five different Australian cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.


The bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and habits in five different Australian cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and habits in five different Australian cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and habits in five different Australian cities, namespecifically Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of residents’ coffee and tea purchasing habits in five different Australian cities, specifically Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.

namely, isn't that common when speaking english, its better to use "specifically" or "particularly"

Overall, it was evidence that going to a coffee was the most common habit, except in Adelaide.


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i think its better if you say what the most common habit in adelaide was as well.

Additionally, the percentage of people buying instant coffee was always higher than that of those purchasing fresh coffee.


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Additionally, the percentage of people buying instant coffee was always higher than that of those purchasing fresh coffee. Additionally, the percentage of people buying instant coffee was always higher than those purchasing fresh coffee.

In terms of Sydney and Melbourne, while the proportion of Sydney people (2) who drank coffee or tea at a coffee was around 60%, this figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at approximately 63%.


In terms ofAs for Sydney and Melbourne, while the proportion of Sydney people in Sydney (2) who drank coffee or tea at a coffee shop was around 60%, thise figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at approximately 63%. As for Sydney and Melbourne, while the proportion of people in Sydney (2) who drank coffee or tea at a coffee shop was around 60%, the figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at approximately 63%.

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Turning to the remaining cities, going to a coffee in Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of residents, at just over 60%, followed by Brisban and Adelaide, with the respective figures around 40% and 55%.


Turning to the remaining cities, going to a coffee shop in Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of residents, at just over 60%, followed by Brisban and Adelaide, with the respective figures around 40% and 55%. Turning to the remaining cities, going to a coffee shop in Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of residents, at just over 60%, followed by Brisban and Adelaide, with the respective figures around 40% and 55%.

Turning to the remaining cities, going toetting a coffee in Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of residents, at just over 60%, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, with their respective figures being around 40% and 55%. Turning to the remaining cities, getting a coffee in Hobart accounted for the highest percentage of residents, at just over 60%, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, with their respective figures being around 40% and 55%.

By comparison, nearly 50% of citizens in Adelaide had a habit of buying instant coffee, compared to approximately 53% of those in Brisban and Hobart.


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By comparison, nearly 50% of citizens in Adelaide had a habit of buying instant coffee, compared to approximately 53% of those in Brisbane and Hobart. By comparison, nearly 50% of citizens in Adelaide had a habit of buying instant coffee, compared to approximately 53% of those in Brisbane and Hobart.

The proportion of people who chose to purchase fresh coffee in Hobart was nearly 40%, which was 7% higher than this figure in Brisban and Adelaide, at roughly 33%.


The proportion of people who chose to purchase fresh coffee in Hobart was nearly 40%, which was 7% higher than thise figure in Brisban and Adelaide, at roughly 33%. The proportion of people who chose to purchase fresh coffee in Hobart was nearly 40%, which was 7% higher than the figure in Brisban and Adelaide, at roughly 33%.

The proportion of people who chose to purchase fresh coffee in Hobart was nearly 40%, which was 7% higher than this figure in Brisbane and Adelaide, at roughly 33%. The proportion of people who chose to purchase fresh coffee in Hobart was nearly 40%, which was 7% higher than this figure in Brisbane and Adelaide, at roughly 33%.

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