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Tammy

July 2, 2024

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High temperature on the way

High temperature is on the way to Shanghai.

If you're in this city, you can feel it.

The endless rainy days finally ended, but the temperature was up.

Today's highest temperature will be 35℃. And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning. It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.

I feel myself getting lazy and impatient. I want to have a vacation!


高温在来上海的路上了。

如果你在这个城市,你能感觉到。

连绵不断的雨天终于结束了,但气温却上升了。

今天的最高气温将达到35℃。如果你在这个城市住了很多年,你可能知道这只是个开始。气温将高达40℃以上,持续两个多月。

感觉自己变得慵懒和不耐烦。我想去度假!

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If you're in this city, you can feel it.

And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.

I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.

I want to have a vacation!

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Tammy

July 3, 2024

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If you're in this city, you can feel it.

Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.

And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.

I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.

I want to have a vacation!

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Tammy

July 3, 2024

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JoeTofu

July 3, 2024

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Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.

And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.

It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.

I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.

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Tammy

July 2, 2024

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Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.

And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.

It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.

I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.

I want to have a vacation!

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Tammy

July 2, 2024

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Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.


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Today's expected highest temperature will be 35℃. Today's expected highest temperature will be 35℃.

And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.


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"High temperature" (singular) makes me think of a fever

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High temperature is on the way to Shanghai.


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If you're in this city, you can feel it.


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The endless rainy days finally ended, but the temperature was up.


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It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.


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ItThe highest temperatures will be up to over 40℃ and this hot weather will last more than two months. The highest temperatures will be over 40℃ and this hot weather will last more than two months.

Your original sentence sounds like the temperature will remain at or above 40°C for more than two months, but I don’t think this is what you mean.

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I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.


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I want to have a vacation!


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