Dec. 1, 2022
Hello! I hope you're having a nice day.
Today I'mm reattempting this homework because people said that the first attempt was confusing.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect.
You can see the images at the bottom of this journal for better context.
First image (kitchen)
The microwave is in the kitchen , on the corner of the room. On the counter, behind the eggs, below the sauce, left to the window.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, right to the salad.
The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam, up to the refrigerator and at the left side of the blender.
Second image (bathroom).
The towels are in front of the washstand, on the right side of the toilet, above the floor and below the painting.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror, they are placed above the washstand and inside a cup.
The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, on the wall.
Third image (bedroom).
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture on the right side of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture under the teddy bear.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture in front of the rug.
The lamp is above the furniture on the left side of the bed, on the right side of the curtains, in front of the bed.
Last image ( living room ).
You can get a book from the red piece of furniture that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings, in front of the window.
The switch to turn the light on/off is next to the lamp, next to the curtains, right of the sofa.
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A Second Attempt of my Homework
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Hello!
I hope you're having a nice day.
Today I'm’m reattempting this homework task because people said that the first attemptone was confusing.
Today I’m reattempting this homework task because people said that the first one was confusing.
Natural !
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect.
You can see the images at the bottom of this journal for better context.
First image (kitchen)
The microwave is in the kitchen , o, more specifically, (it) is located in the corner of the room.
The microwave is in the kitchen, more specifically, (it) is located in the corner of the room.
On the counter, behind the eggs, below the sauce, left to the window.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, and to the right to the salad.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf and to the right to the salad.
The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam, up to the refrigerator and at the left side of the blender.
Second image (bathroom).
The towels are in front of the washstand, on the right side of the toilet, above the floor and below the painting.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror, they are placed above the washstand and inside of a cup.
The toothbrushes are in front of the mirror, they are placed above the washstand and inside of a cup.
The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, located on the wall. The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, located on the wall.
Third image (bedroom).
I can store my clothes in the piece of furnitureside of the dresser on the right side of the bed.
I can store my clothes inside of the dresser on the right side of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture under the teddy bear.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture located in front of the rug. I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture located in front of the rug.
The lamp is above the furniture on the left side of the bed, on the right side of the curtains, in front of the bed.
Last image ( living room ).
You can get a book from the red piece of furniture that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings, and in front of the window.
You can get a book from the red piece of furniture that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings and in front of the window.
The switch to turn the light on/off is next to the lamp, next to and the curtains, and to the right of the sofa.
The switch to turn the light on/off is next to the lamp and the curtains, and to the right of the sofa.
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Second Try OfAttempt on My Homework
Second Attempt on My Homework
Hello!
I hope you're having a nice day.
Today I'mm reattempting this homework because people said that the first attempt was confusing.
Today I'm reattempting this homework because people said that the first attempt was confusing.
Note: I'm aiming for thean American English dialect.
Note: I'm aiming for an American English dialect.
Since we have many ways of speaking English in the US, I thought "an American dialect" would be more accurate than "the American dialect."
You can see the images at the bottom of this journal for better context.
First image (kitchen)
The microwave is in the kitchen , oin the corner of the room.
The microwave is in the kitchen, in the corner of the room.
OIt's on the counter, behind the eggs, below the sauce, under the clock and to the left tof the wsindowk.
It's on the counter under the clock and to the left of the sink.
The sink is one of the first things I see and there's only one corner in the picture.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, right to the saladFruit is placed on a platter which is set on top of the refrigerator.
Fruit is placed on a platter which is set on top of the refrigerator.
We don't often use "fruits" for the plural form of "fruit." Very often, the plural form is just "fruit."
The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam, up to the refrigerator and at the left side of the blend above the refrigerator between a jar of jam and a pitcher.
The flour is on the shelf above the refrigerator between a jar of jam and a pitcher.
I don't see a blender ...
Second image (bathroom).
The towels are in front of the washstand, on the right sidecabinet is ofn the toilet,wall above the floor and below the paintingtoilet.
The cabinet is on the wall above the toilet.
I think they want us to describe what's pictured at letter d.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror, they are placed above the washstand and inside a cupplaced in a cup on the right side of the sink and in front of the mirror.
The toothbrushes are placed in a cup on the right side of the sink and in front of the mirror.
The mirror is above the washstand, on the right sidehangs ofn the painting, onwall above the wallsink.
The mirror hangs on the wall above the sink.
Third image (bedroom).
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture onbureau to the right side of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the bureau to the right of the bed.
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I can store my clothes in the chest of drawers to the right of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture under the teddy bear.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture in front of the rug.
The lamp is above the furniture on the left side of the bed, onon the nightstand to the righleft side of the curtains, in front of the bed.
The lamp is on the nightstand to the left side of the bed.
Last image ( living room ).
You can get a book fromthat's on top of the red piece of furniture that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings, in front of the window.
You can get a book that's on top of the red piece of furniture.
The switch to turn the light on/ and off is next to the lamp, next to the curtains, right of the sofa which is to the right of the sofa next to the curtains.
The switch to turn the light on and off is next to the lamp which is to the right of the sofa next to the curtains.
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Second Try Of My HomeworkMy Homework (Second Attempt)
My Homework (Second Attempt)
This is more natural
Hello!
I hope you're having a nice day.
Today I'mm reattempting this homework because people said that the first attempt was confusing.
Today I'm reattempting this homework because people said that the first attempt was confusing.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect.
Note: I'm aiming for American English.
Or "American dialect," but that sounds less natural.
You can see the images at the bottom of this journal for better context.
First image (kitchen)
The microwave is in the kitchen , oin the corner of the room.
The microwave is in the kitchen, in the corner of the room.
"In" if you're talking about a space. "On" if you're talking about something flat, like the corner of a rug.
O(It is) on the counter, behind the eggs, below the sauce, (and) left tof the window.
(It is) on the counter, behind the eggs, below the sauce, (and) left of the window.
It sounds natural to omit "and" but grammatically speaking it is necessary.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, right tof the salad.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, right of the salad.
The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam, up toabove the refrigerator and ato the left side of the blender.
The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam, above the refrigerator and to the left of the blender.
Second image (bathroom).
The towels are in front of the washstand, on the right side of the toilet, above the floor and below the painting.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror,; they are placed above the washstand and inside a cup.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror; they are placed above the washstand and inside a cup.
The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, and on the wall. The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, and on the wall.
Third image (bedroom).
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture on(dresser) to the right side of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the (dresser) to the right of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture under(dresser) that the teddy bear sits on.
I can store my clothes in the (dresser) that the teddy bear sits on.
"Under" here would sound more appropriate if you were saying that the dresser was underneath something like a shelf or picture, not something small that you might also move around.
I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture(dresser) in front of the rug.
I can store my clothes in the (dresser) in front of the rug.
The lamp is above the furniture(nightstand) on the left side of the bed, on the right side of the curtains, (and) in front of the bed.
The lamp is above the (nightstand) on the left side of the bed, on the right side of the curtains, (and) in front of the bed.
I would describe it as a nightstand or bedside table.
Last image ( living room ).
Last image (living room).
You can get a book from the red piece of furniture(cabinet) that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings, in front of the window.
You can get a book from the (cabinet) that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings, in front of the window.
This is grammatical but sounds awkward, as it is rather long and has many different descriptors.
The light switch to turn the light on/off is next to the lamp, next to the curtains, (and) right of the sofa.
The light switch is next to the lamp, next to the curtains, (and) right of the sofa.
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I noticed, by the way, that your textbook's English isn't quite right. "After you had seen" is not correct English.
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The microwave is in the kitchen , on the corner of the room.
The microwave is in the kitchen "In" if you're talking about a space. "On" if you're talking about something flat, like the corner of a rug.
The microwave is in the kitchen
The microwave is in the kitchen |
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On the counter, behind the eggs, below the sauce, left to the window.
It sounds natural to omit "and" but grammatically speaking it is necessary.
The sink is one of the first things I see and there's only one corner in the picture. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, right to the salad.
The fruits are above the fridge, below the shelf, right
We don't often use "fruits" for the plural form of "fruit." Very often, the plural form is just "fruit."
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The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam, up to the refrigerator and at the left side of the blender.
The flour is on the shelf, to the right of the jam,
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The towels are in front of the washstand, on the right side of the toilet, above the floor and below the painting. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror, they are placed above the washstand and inside a cup.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror
The toothbrushes are
The toothbrushes are in |
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The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, on the wall. The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, and on the wall. The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, and on the wall.
The mirror The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, located on the wall. The mirror is above the washstand, on the right side of the painting, located on the wall. |
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I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture on the right side of the bed.
I can store my clothes in the
I can store my clothes in the or I can store my clothes in the chest of drawers to the right of the bed.
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I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture under the teddy bear.
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I can store my clothes in the piece of furniture in front of the rug.
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The lamp is above the furniture on the left side of the bed, on the right side of the curtains, in front of the bed.
The lamp is above the I would describe it as a nightstand or bedside table.
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Last image ( living room ).
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You can get a book from the red piece of furniture that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings, in front of the window.
You can get a book from the This is grammatical but sounds awkward, as it is rather long and has many different descriptors.
You can get a book
You can get a book from the red piece of furniture that is next to the clock and underneath the lamps and the paintings |
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The switch to turn the light on/off is next to the lamp, next to the curtains, right of the sofa.
The light switch
The switch to turn the light on
The switch to turn the light on/off is next to the lamp |
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