April 4, 2023
Friendship
I haven't seen my friend for a long time because I met some bad experiences in my life, and I just wanted to escape from everything. Recently, I've been feeling better. I asked my friend to hang out with me. However, she told me that she didn't have time to see me. It's really sad to hear it. She just likes my happy part and doesn't want to see my sad part.
Finally, I had seen her on Friday evening last week. We walked around the park and she had been talking all the time, totally about herself. She didn't care about me and she knew my broken heart condition. I think maybe she is insensitive to my feeling. It wasn't a comfortable talking evening.
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Friendship
I havedn't seen my friend for a long time because I metencountered some bad experiences in my life, and I just wanted to escape from everything.
I hadn't seen my friend for a long time because I encountered some bad experiences in my life, and I just wanted to escape from everything.
"Hadn't" because now you have seen her recently.
Recently, I've been feeling better.
I asked my friend to hang out with me.
However, she told me that she didn't have time to see me.
It' was really sad to hear it.
It was really sad to hear it.
"Was" is more appropriate.
She just likes my happy part and doesn't want to see my sad part. She just likes my happy part and doesn't want to see my sad part.
More idiomatically: "She just likes me when I'm happy and doesn't want to see me when I'm sad."
Finally, I had seensaw her on Friday evening last week.
Finally, I saw her Friday evening last week.
We walked around the park and she had been talking all thtalked the whole time, totallyjust about herself.
We walked around the park and she talked the whole time, just about herself.
She didn't care about me and, even though she knew about my broken heart condition.
She didn't care about me, even though she knew about my broken heart.
I think maybe she is insensitive to my feelings. I think maybe she is insensitive to my feelings.
It wasn't a comfortable evening talking eveningto her.
It wasn't a comfortable evening talking to her.
April 6, 2023
I think maybe she is insensitive to my feelings.
Thank you for correcting my sentences. I have a question.
Why do I need to use the plural form? when "feeling" is my personal emotion.
April 6, 2023
Thank you for correcting my sentences. I have a question. Why do I need to use the plural form? when "feeling" is my personal emotion.
“Feeling” is not idiomatic; you would only use it when identifying how you feel in a specific situation. “Feelings” is for emotions in general.
April 7, 2023
“Feeling” is not idiomatic; you would only use it when identifying how you feel in a specific situation. “Feelings” is for emotions in general.
I got it. Thank you!!
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I haven't seen my friend for a long time because I met some bad experiences in my life, and I just wanted to escape from everything.
I ha "Hadn't" because now you have seen her recently. |
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Recently, I've been feeling better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I asked my friend to hang out with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, she told me that she didn't have time to see me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's really sad to hear it.
It "Was" is more appropriate. |
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She just likes my happy part and doesn't want to see my sad part. She just likes my happy part and doesn't want to see my sad part. She just likes my happy part and doesn't want to see my sad part. More idiomatically: "She just likes me when I'm happy and doesn't want to see me when I'm sad." |
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Finally, I had seen her on Friday evening last week.
Finally, I |
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We walked around the park and she had been talking all the time, totally about herself.
We walked around the park and she |
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She didn't care about me and she knew my broken heart condition.
She didn't care about me |
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I think maybe she is insensitive to my feeling. I think maybe she is insensitive to my feelings. I think maybe she is insensitive to my feelings. |
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It wasn't a comfortable talking evening.
It wasn't a comfortable evening talking |
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