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FCE essay - animals in the zoos

Is it wrong to keep animals in zoos?

Write about:
1. How the animals are treated
2. Learning about the animals
3. _______ (your own idea)

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Keeping animals in the zoos

Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live closed to humans. However several issues can arise regarding the ethics of enclosing animals in a closed space.

Firstly, not always a proper treatment can be guaranted to the animals in zoos. In last years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglection have been reported in zoos around the world. In a few, but extremal cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead. A better zoo inspection should be ensured to detect, and avoid those situations.

However, to tell all the truth, these cases are not the general rule. Most zoos usually take high care commitment to their animals, not only on the feeding and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lifes in captivity.

To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, because a few cases of negligence or inattention. New paradigms of animal care in modern zoos are being carried out in zoos like Cabarceno, in the north of Spain, where animals live in a semi-freedom environment, with plenty of space imitating real habitat in nature.

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Is it wrong to keep animals in zoos?

Write about: 1.

How the animals are treated 2.

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June 14, 2023

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FCE essay - animals in the zoos

Is it wrong to keep animals in zoos?

Write about: 1.

How the animals are treated 2.

Learning about the animals 3.

In a few, but extremal cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead.

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Is it wrong to keep animals in zoos?

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FCE essay - animals in the zoos


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How the animals are treated 2.


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_______ (your own idea) The essay Keeping animals in the zoos Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live closed to humans.


_______ (your own idea) The essay Keeping animals in the zoos Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live closed to humans. _______ (your own idea) The essay Keeping animals in zoos Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live close to humans.

_______ (your own idea) The essay Keeping animals in the zoos Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live closed to humans. _______ (your own idea) The essay Keeping animals in the zoos Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live close to humans.

_______ (your own idea) The essay Keeping animals in the zoos Zoos can be a fantastic place where animals can live closed to humans.

However several issues can arise regarding the ethics of enclosing animals in a closed space.


However, several issues can arise regarding the ethics of enclosforcing animals in a to live in an enclosed space. However, several issues can arise regarding the ethics of forcing animals to live in an enclosed space.

Somehow sounds weird to enclose animals. Not sure why. You enclose a letter in an envelope, I'm not sure if you can enclose animals in a zoo (they can 'be enclosed', so the passive form is fine)

Firstly, not always a proper treatment can be guaranted to the animals in zoos.


Firstly, not always a proper treatment cannot always be guaranteed to the animals in zoos. Firstly, proper treatment cannot always be guaranteed to the animals in zoos.

Firstly, not always a proper treatment cannot always be guaranteed to the animals in zoos. Firstly, proper treatment cannot always be guaranteed to the animals in zoos

In last years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglection have been reported in zoos around the world.


In lastprevious years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglection have been reported in zoos around the world. In previous years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglection have been reported in zoos around the world.

In lasrecent years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglectionnegligence have been reported in zoos around the world. In recent years, several cases of animal mistreatment and negligence have been reported in zoos around the world.

In the last years, several years, cases of animal mistreatment and care neglectionneglegence have been reported in zoos around the world. In the last several years, cases of animal mistreatment and neglegence have been reported in zoos around the world.

In lastthe last few years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglection have been reported in zoos around the world. In the last few years, several cases of animal mistreatment and care neglection have been reported in zoos around the world.

In a few, but extremal cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead.


In a few, but extremale cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead. In a few but extreme cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead.

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In a few, but extremale cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead. In a few, but extreme cases, the animals were found malnourished or even dead.

A better zoo inspection should be ensured to detect, and avoid those situations.


A better zoo inspection should be ensured to detect, and avoid those situations. A better zoo inspection should be ensured to detect and avoid those situations.

A better zoo inspection should be ensurconducted to detect, and avoid those situations. A better zoo inspection should be conducted to detect and avoid those situations.

A better zoo inspection should be ensured to detect, and avoid those situations. A better zoo inspection should be ensured to detect and avoid those situations.

However, to tell all the truth, these cases are not the general rule.


However, to tell all the truth, these cases are not the general rule. However, to tell truth, these cases are not the general rule.

However, to tell all the truth, these cases are not the general rule. However, to tell the truth, these cases are not the general rule.

However, to tell all the truth, thesethe whole truth, cases are not the general rule. However, to tell the whole truth, cases are not the general rule.

Most zoos usually take high care commitment to their animals, not only on the feeding and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lifes in captivity.


Most zoos usually take high care commitment to their animals, not only on the feeding and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lifves in captivity. Most zoos usually take high care commitment to their animals, not only on the feeding and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lives in captivity.

Most zoos usually takare high carely commitment toted to taking care of their animals, not only on the feedingwith regards to their food and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lifves in captivity. Most zoos are highly committed to taking care of their animals, not only with regards to their food and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lives in captivity.

I rewrote the first part to express what I think you meant to say, hope that it makes sense

Most zoos usually take high care commitment to their animals, not only oin the feeding and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lifves in captivity. Most zoos usually take high care commitment to their animals, not only in the feeding and living conditions, but also trying to learn about the animals to improve their lives in captivity.

To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, because a few cases of negligence or inattention.


To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, just because there are a few cases of negligence or inot paying attention. To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, just because there are a few cases of negligence or not paying attention.

To sum up, I would say that not all the zoos should be demonised, because of a few cases of negligence or inattention. To sum up, I would say that not all zoos should be demonised because of a few cases of negligence or inattention.

To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, because of a few cases ofabout negligence or inattention to animals. To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, because of a few cases about negligence or inattention to animals.

To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, because of a few cases of negligence or inattention. To sum up, I would say not all the zoos should be demonised, because of a few cases of negligence or inattention.

New paradigms of animal care in modern zoos are being carried out in zoos like Cabarceno, in the north of Spain, where animals live in a semi-freedom environment, with plenty of space imitating real habitat in nature.


New paradigms of animal care in modern zoos are being carried out in zoos like Cabarceno, in the north of Spain, where animals live in a semi-freedom environmenthave partial freedom, with plenty of space imitating real habitat in nature. New paradigms of animal care in modern zoos are being carried out in zoos like Cabarceno, in the north of Spain, where animals live in have partial freedom, with plenty of space imitating real habitat in nature.

New paradigms of animal care in modern zoos are being carried out in zoos like Cabarceno, in the north of Spain, where animals live in a semi-freedom environment, with plenty of space imitating real habitat in naturetheir natural habitat. New paradigms of animal care in modern zoos are being carried out in zoos like Cabarceno, in the north of Spain, where animals live in a semi-free environment, with plenty of space imitating their natural habitat.

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