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nuggets
Today, I saw a youtube video titled
"Nuggets".
At first, I thought it was a fun video with cute animal like a bird. However, it turned out that it is a creepy story about the danger of addiction.
In this video, "Nuggets" means the yellow object like a jelly. When a bird-like animal first tries to intake this, it feels kind of comfortable and floats on sky. However, as it intakes nuggets many times, the lasting time of floating becomes shorter and shorter, and it comes to get injured by the impact of a fall. Its body colour becomes darkened, and its body shape also changes. However, it cannot stop eating nuggets. In the end, the screen become dark, and you cannot know the ending.
今日、「nuggets」というタイトルのYouTube動画を見ました。
最初は、鳥のような可愛い動物が登場する楽しい動画だと思っていました。ところが、中毒の危険性を描いた不気味な物語でした。
この動画で「nugget」とは、ゼリーのような黄色い物体のことです。鳥のような動物が初めてこれを口にすると、なんとなく気持ちよさそうに空を漂います。しかし、何度もnuggetを口にすると、浮いている時間がどんどん短くなり、落下の衝撃で怪我をします。体の色は黒ずみ、体型も変化していきます。それでも、nuggetを食べるのをやめることはできません。そして最後には、画面が暗くなり、結末を知ることはできません。
nNuggets
Today, I saw a yYoutTube video titled
"Nuggets".
At first, I thought it was a fun video with cute animals like a bird.
However, it turned out that it is a creepy story about the danger of addiction.
In this video, "Nuggets" means the yellow object like a jellyrefers to a yellow, jelly like object.
The word "means" is typically used more for a definition of a word, or a understanding of a phrase.
However, for this sentence, "Nuggets" does not change the definition of "Nuggets" but instead we are associate the word "Nuggets" with a new object. Does that make sense?
When a bird-like animal first tries to intakeconsumes this, it feels kind of comfortable and floats onin the sky.
However, as it intakconsumes these nuggets many times, the lasting timeore and more, the duration of floating becomes shorter and shorter, and it becomes to get injured by the impact of a fall.
Complex sentence, good job!
Here, "many times" is a little unnatural. So you could use "more and more", or "over and over" which are set expressions in English for repeating actions like this.
"lasting time" is technically correct, but there is a specific word for this: "duration"!
"it comes to get" is also a little unnatural. A more natural way to phrase it would be that something "becomes" injured.
Its body colour becomes darkened, and its body shape also changes.
However, it cannot stop eating nuggets.
In the end, the screen becomes dark, and you cannot know the ending.
Another way to say "cannot know the ending" could be "and the ending remains 'unknown'".
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Good job! Those were more complex senteces, but I could understand what each sentence was trying to say!
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Thank you for your corrections! These were really helpful!
nNuggets
Today, I saw a youtube video titled
"Nuggets".
At first, I thought it was a fun video with a cute animal like a bird.
However, it turned out that it iwas a creepy story about the danger of addiction.
In this video, "Nuggets" means therefers to a yellow object that looks like a jelly.
When athe bird-like animal first tries to intake thiseat one, it feels kind of comfortable and floats oninto the sky.
However, as it intakes nuggets many timeeats more nuggets, the lasfloating time of floating becomegets shorter and shorter, and it comes to getends up getting injured by the impact of a fall.
Its body colour becomes darkeneds, and its body shape also changes.
However (Despite this), it cannot stop eating nuggets.
Yours isn't wrong, just a variation that can change things up a bit.
In the end, the screen becometurns dark, and you cannot know the endingwill never know what happens next.
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When I first saw the title, I thought it must be about the chicken nuggets from McDonald's. Now it sounds more like a horror story. 😱
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Thank you very much! Actually I also thouht it must be about the chicken nuggets!
nNuggets
Today, I saw a yYoutTube video titledcalled, "Nuggets".
"Nuggets".
At first, I thought it was a fun video with a cute animal like a bird.
However, it turned out that it is a creepy story about the danger of addiction.
In this video, "Nnuggets" signifies/means the yellow object like a jelly.
When a bird-like animal first tries to intake thisconsume it, it feels kind of comfortable and floats onin the sky.
However, as it intakes nuggeats many timenuggets, the lasting timeduration of floating becomes shorter and shorter, and it comes to. It gets injured bydue to the impact of athe fall.
Its body colour becomes darkenedr, and its body shape also changes.
However, it cannot stop eating nuggets.
In the end, the screen becomes dark, and you cando not know the ending.
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This video sounds interesting. Please give the link.
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Thank you for your corrections! You can watch the video from this link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HUngLgGRJpo
today
You're welcome and thank you for the video!
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