Correct me if you'd likeplease. Correct me please.

Please sounds more natural than 'if you'd like'

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My main suggestion is to remember to separate into sentences with full stops to make it easy to follow. Also, the last point, "wasting time", is a negative thing, unlike the other positive points in the list. Perhaps, "remembering the time that you spend" is better.

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Just corrected flow...semantics. The goal is to understand and I understood the text, nice.

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"you're" is short for "you are". "I" is always capitalised. This is quite a long sentence so I've broken it up a bit.

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when you were happy,. I think the most important point of this is that everyone can see the world, but only some people, can comprehend the life, the point that we came here for, to lifve. when you were happy. I think the most important point of this is that everyone can see the world, but only some people, can comprehend life, the point that we came here for, to live.

when you were happy, I think the most important point of this is that everyone can see the world, but only some people, can comprehend the life, the point that we came herpoint of life, to lifve. I think the most important point is that everyone can see the world, but only some people can comprehend the point of life, to live.

Thank you for takeing your time and trying to help other people. Thank you for taking your time and trying to help other people.

"for" is a preposition, so it is always followed by "-ing" verbs.

Thank you for takeing your time and tryfor trying to help other people. Thank you for taking your time and for trying to help other people.