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kazu

Aug. 13, 2020

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I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago. I had been going out with her for about ten months. One of the reasons is that we had decided to break up when I go to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it. Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her up because the fault is mine. She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything like animals, plants and things like that. I really love her inner beauty. I wish her happiness from the bottom of my heart.

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Girlfriend

I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago.

I really love her inner beauty.

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kazu

Aug. 14, 2020

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I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago.

I had been going out with her for about ten months.

Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her up because the fault is mine.

She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything like animals, plants and things like that.

I really love her inner beauty.

I wish her happiness from the bottom of my heart.

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kazu

Aug. 14, 2020

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Girlfriend


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I broke up with my girlfriend about two weeks ago.


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I had been going out with her for about ten months.


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I had been going out withdating her for about ten months. I had been dating her for about ten months.

"dating" is a nicer word to use in this sentence, however "going out with" is fine to say also and is commonly used

One of the reasons is that we had decided to break up when I go to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it.


One of the reasons is that we had decided to break up when I goas that I'm going to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it. One of the reasons that we decided to break up was that I'm going to study abroad next year, but the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriend and she couldn't stand it.

One of the reasons is thatwhy we hadve decided to break up when I go tois due to me studying abroad next year, but. Howvever the main reason is that I was growing apart from my girlfriendher and she couldn't stand it. One of the reasons why we have decided to break up is due to me studying abroad next year. Howvever the main reason is that I was growing apart from my her and she couldn't stand it.

Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her up because the fault is mine.


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Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her upback because the fault is minwith me. Although I didn't want to break up with her, I couldn't hold her back because the fault is with me.

She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything like animals, plants and things like that.


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She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything likeand everyone, even animals, plants and things like that.more. She was beautiful, attractive, and thoughtful to everything and everyone, even animals, plants and more.

Putting "more" at the end is a more thought through way of ending the sentence

I really love her inner beauty.


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I wish her happiness from the bottom of my heart.


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I wish her all the happiness from the bottom of my heart. I wish her all the happiness from the bottom of my heart.

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