Aug. 13, 2020
It is easier to become an educated person now (2) ?
Second, the degree won’t be the only gauge in personal achievement for the current decade. Even more for some, they may think taking education is wasting time. Rick, one of the protagonists of a cartoon opera called “Rick and Morty”, is the front-running of the idea, doubtlessly. To be honest, in life, some think that their own intelligence could enable them to rapidly grab success. And then they will abandon the opportunity of getting an education. In the current case, some may be really having the ability, and some have self-conceit that supports their unpragmatic ambition and give up being educated. This kind of situation seems to gradually increase in the young generation.
Finally, It is hard to become an educated person for now. There are a lot of lures from outside and people will be distracted more easily. Also, time change, demand changes. Being educated will not be the only step to approach the ways of success, for some. By the way, the majority now have a low desire to educate, for my observation.
I wrote around 350 words, I separated two-part and posted them. And this post is the second part. If you can leave some suggestions to improve my writing, that is very helpful to me. thank you.
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It is easier to become an educated person now (2) ?
Second, thea degree won’t be the only gauge in personal achievement for the current decade.
Second, a degree won’t be the only gauge in personal achievement for the current decade.
Even more fFor some, they may think taking education is a wastinge of time.
For some, they may think education is a waste of time.
Rick, one of the protagonists of athe cartoon opera called “Rick and Morty”, is undoubtably the front-runninger of the idea, doubtlessly.
Rick, one of the protagonists of the cartoon “Rick and Morty”, is undoubtably the front-runner of the idea
To be honest, in life, some think that their ownbelieve that being intelligencet could enable them to rapidly grabachieve success.
To be honest, in life, some believe that being intelligent could enable them to rapidly achieve success.
In the current case, some may be really havinghave the ability, and some may have self-conceit that supporta complacency that feeds their unpragmatic ambition and therefore give up beon seeking an educated.ion.
In the current case, some may have the ability, and some may have a complacency that feeds their unpragmatic ambition and therefore give up on seeking an education.
This one was hard to correct, as wasn’t 100% sure what was trying to be said. I have altered it the best I could.
This kind of situation seems to be gradually increaseing in the younger generation.
This situation seems to be gradually increasing in the younger generation.
Finally, It is hard to become an educated person for now.
Finally, It is hard to become an educated person.
There are a lot of lurestemptations luring from the outside and people will be distracted more easily.
There are a lot of temptations luring from the outside and people will be distracted more easily.
Also, as times change, demand changes. Also, as times change, demand changes.
Being educated will not be the only step to approachchieve the ways of success, for some.
Being educated will not be the only step to achieve the ways of success, for some.
By the wayFrom my observations, the majority now have a low desire to educate, for my observseek education.
From my observations, the majority now have a low desire to seek education.
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Very good! I would recommend working on your vocabulary, which I know can be difficult. Keep it up!
Aug. 19, 2020
thank your feedback
"In the current case, some may be really having the ability, and some have self-conceit that supports their unpragmatic ambition and gives up being educated.
--- In here, I want to say that most of the people are overrate self-gift/ intelligent. That some of them have immense ambitions. But their ability can not support their achieve the goal. And they thought they are smart as Ricky to abandon to peel off the chance to give up been educated.
So do you have any idea how to rewrite this sentence? please :D
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It is easier to become an educated person now (2) ? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Second, the degree won’t be the only gauge in personal achievement for the current decade.
Second, |
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Even more for some, they may think taking education is wasting time.
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Rick, one of the protagonists of a cartoon opera called “Rick and Morty”, is the front-running of the idea, doubtlessly.
Rick, one of the protagonists of |
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To be honest, in life, some think that their own intelligence could enable them to rapidly grab success.
To be honest, in life, some |
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And then they will abandon the opportunity of getting an education. |
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In the current case, some may be really having the ability, and some have self-conceit that supports their unpragmatic ambition and give up being educated.
In the current case, some may This one was hard to correct, as wasn’t 100% sure what was trying to be said. I have altered it the best I could. |
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This kind of situation seems to gradually increase in the young generation.
This |
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Finally, It is hard to become an educated person for now.
Finally, It is hard to become an educated person |
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There are a lot of lures from outside and people will be distracted more easily.
There are a lot of |
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Also, time change, demand changes. Also, as times change, demand changes. Also, as times change, demand changes. |
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Being educated will not be the only step to approach the ways of success, for some.
Being educated will not be the only step to a |
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By the way, the majority now have a low desire to educate, for my observation.
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