Sept. 23, 2020
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Just reading a Japan news.
This long weekend where is most the Japanese “go to” place.
No prize for knowing the answer.
Camping.
All the campsites are full of people.
Never occurs to me selling camping product is a profitable business.
But now I may change my mind.
Maybe I should open a camping school in Japan.
To educate them camping skills just like “Bear Grylls”.
Or, setup a digital detox challenge for them.
Just like the one in western country.
No Wi-fi connection life in nature.
In return will getting paid of $1000.
I think with my help Japan’s economy will picking up again.
https://edition.cnn.com/travel/article/national-park-digital-detox-challenge-prize-money/index.html
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JI just reading a some news from Japan news.
I just read some news from Japan.
This long weekend where is most the Japanese “go to” place.What do you think is the most “go to” place for Japanese people?
What do you think is the most “go to” place for Japanese people?
Campingsites.
Campsites.
NIt has never occursred to me sellingthat camping product is a profitable business.
It has never occurred to me that camping is a profitable business.
To educate them, to teach people camping skills just like “Bear Grylls”.
, to teach people camping skills just like Bear Grylls.
Or, I should set up a digital detox challenge for them.people,
Or, I should set up a digital detox challenge for people,
Jjust like the ones in western countryies.
just like ones in western countries.
No Wi-fi connection life inThere will be no wi-fi, just nature.,
There will be no wi-fi, just nature,
In returnand I will getting paid of $1000 in return.
and I will get paid $1000 in return.
I think with my help Japan’s economy will be able to picking up again.
I think with my help Japan’s economy will be able to pick up again.
GoTo Power + 4 days Holiday
Just reading a Japan news a news from Japan.
Just read a news from Japan.
This long weekend wWhere isdid most the Japanese “people got to” place. this long weekend?
Where did most Japanese people got to this long weekend?
I think u meant this as a rhetorical question? Since the next statement treats this sentence as a question, so i reformulated it to best express your intentions :) i hope this was right?
Campingsites.
Campsites.
You asked for a location in the question so i changed camping (verb) to campsites (general noun)
NIt never occursred to me that selling camping products is a profitable business.
It never occurred to me that selling camping products is a profitable business.
Im not sure how to explain this but its just lots of nuances in english that unfortunately you’d have to just pick up :(
Just like the one in western countryies.
Just like the one in western countries.
There are more than one country in the west :)
No Wi-fi connections, just life in nature. No Wi-fi connections, just life in nature.
In return will getting paid of, they would pay me $1000.
In return, they would pay me $1000.
I think this is what the sentence meant? Unlike chinese, a subject is needed for every independent clause for English :)
I think with my help, Japan’s economy will be picking up again. I think with my help, Japan’s economy will be picking up again.
Another nuance with the comma, and i changed the verb to fit the future infinitive youre using here :)
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Just reading a Japan news.
Just read
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This long weekend where is most the Japanese “go to” place.
I think u meant this as a rhetorical question? Since the next statement treats this sentence as a question, so i reformulated it to best express your intentions :) i hope this was right?
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No prize for knowing the answer. |
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Camping.
Camp You asked for a location in the question so i changed camping (verb) to campsites (general noun)
Camp |
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All the campsites are full of people. |
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Never occurs to me selling camping product is a profitable business.
Im not sure how to explain this but its just lots of nuances in english that unfortunately you’d have to just pick up :(
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But now I may change my mind. |
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Maybe I should open a camping school in Japan. |
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To educate them camping skills just like “Bear Grylls”.
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Or, setup a digital detox challenge for them.
Or, I should set up a digital detox challenge for |
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Just like the one in western country.
Just like the one in western countr There are more than one country in the west :)
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No Wi-fi connection life in nature. No Wi-fi connections, just life in nature. No Wi-fi connections, just life in nature.
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In return will getting paid of $1000.
In return I think this is what the sentence meant? Unlike chinese, a subject is needed for every independent clause for English :)
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I think with my help Japan’s economy will picking up again. I think with my help, Japan’s economy will be picking up again. I think with my help, Japan’s economy will be picking up again. Another nuance with the comma, and i changed the verb to fit the future infinitive youre using here :)
I think with my help Japan’s economy will be able to pick |
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