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If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again?

I don’t know. But if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would.

Destiny exists. A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. With these, they likely follow a specific path.

Compared with health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little. People often won’t understand this until they’re older.

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I don’t know.

Destiny exists.

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If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again?


If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again? If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again?

If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey againhe same path? If I could go back in time, would I choose the same path?

This makes sense, but 'to go through' and 'again' are not needed. Also, 'journey' makes sense, but this idea is commonly written as 'same path'.

I don’t know.


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But if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would.


But, if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would. But, if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would.

But if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid don't think I would. But if I had the same constitution and personality, I don't think I would.

'Constitution' is used to talk about the law; I don't know what you mean by 'constitution'. Also, 'I'm afraid...' is very formal.

Destiny exists.


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A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality.


A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality.

It sounds like by 'constitution' you mean 'actions'?

With these, they likely follow a specific path.


With these, they likely follow a specific path. With these, they likely follow a specific path.

With these, theypeople will likely follow a specificthe same path. With these, people will likely follow the same path.

'They' give the sense that there is a specific group of people; 'people' shows you are talking about people in general.

Compared with health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little.


Compared withto health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little. Compared to health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little.

Compared with health and happiness, official posistatus/occupations and wealth mean little. Compared with health and happiness, status/occupation and wealth mean little.

'Status' or 'occupation' would fit better here.

People often won’t understand this until they’re older.


People often won’t/ don't understand this until they’re/ get older. People often won’t/ don't understand this until they’re/ get older.

People often won’t understand this until they’re older. People often won’t understand this until they’re older.

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