May 19, 2025
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If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again?
I don’t know. But if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would.
Destiny exists. A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. With these, they likely follow a specific path.
Compared with health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little. People often won’t understand this until they’re older.
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If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey againhe same path?
If I could go back in time, would I choose the same path?
This makes sense, but 'to go through' and 'again' are not needed. Also, 'journey' makes sense, but this idea is commonly written as 'same path'.
I don’t know.
But if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid don't think I would.
But if I had the same constitution and personality, I don't think I would.
'Constitution' is used to talk about the law; I don't know what you mean by 'constitution'. Also, 'I'm afraid...' is very formal.
Destiny exists.
A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality.
It sounds like by 'constitution' you mean 'actions'?
With these, theypeople will likely follow a specificthe same path.
With these, people will likely follow the same path.
'They' give the sense that there is a specific group of people; 'people' shows you are talking about people in general.
Compared with health and happiness, official posistatus/occupations and wealth mean little.
Compared with health and happiness, status/occupation and wealth mean little.
'Status' or 'occupation' would fit better here.
People often won’t understand this until they’re older. People often won’t understand this until they’re older.
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May 19, 2025
I want to say “体质” in English, but I don’t know what it is. I looked it up in a dictionary. The dictionary gave me several words and the first one was “constitution”. Thank you for your correction.
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If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again? If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again?
But, if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would. But, if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would.
With these, they likely follow a specific path. With these, they likely follow a specific path.
Compared withto health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little.
Compared to health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little.
People often won’t/ don't understand this until they’re/ get older. People often won’t/ don't understand this until they’re/ get older.
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If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again? If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again? If I could go back in time, would I choose to go through the same journey again?
If I could go back in time, would I choose t This makes sense, but 'to go through' and 'again' are not needed. Also, 'journey' makes sense, but this idea is commonly written as 'same path'. |
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I don’t know. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would. But, if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would. But, if I had the same constitution and personality, I’m afraid I would.
But if I had the same constitution and personality, I 'Constitution' is used to talk about the law; I don't know what you mean by 'constitution'. Also, 'I'm afraid...' is very formal. |
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Destiny exists. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. A person’s destiny is shaped by their constitution and personality. It sounds like by 'constitution' you mean 'actions'? |
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With these, they likely follow a specific path. With these, they likely follow a specific path. With these, they likely follow a specific path.
With these, 'They' give the sense that there is a specific group of people; 'people' shows you are talking about people in general. |
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Compared with health and happiness, official positions and wealth mean little.
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Compared with health and happiness, 'Status' or 'occupation' would fit better here. |
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People often won’t understand this until they’re older. People often won’t/ don't understand this until they’re/ get older. People often won’t/ don't understand this until they’re/ get older. People often won’t understand this until they’re older. People often won’t understand this until they’re older. |
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