Sept. 15, 2020
Movie ticket
Movie ticket is so expensive that I rarely buy it without any discount campaign.
The price for adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, enables you to sign up for two months' Netflix.
映画チケットはとても高いから、私は割引キャンペーンなしに買うことは滅多にない。
大人料金は1900円（18ドルに相当）で、Netflix2ヶ月分は払えてしまう。
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The price for an adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, enableswhich would allow you to sign up for two months' Netflix.
The price for an adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, which would allow you to sign up for two months' Netflix.
That's the variant which sounds most natural to me.
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Yea, expensive.. haven't been to a cinema in years.
Sept. 20, 2020
That's too bad.. By the way, your suggestion (enable => allow) was very helpful. Thank you!
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It is more common for titles with only common nouns to either make them plural ("Movie tickets") or place an article in the front ("A Movie Ticket/The Movie Ticket"). I would make it plural here since you are talking about movie tickets in general.
Movie ticket iss are so expensive that I rarely buy ithem without any discount campaign.
Movie tickets are so expensive that I rarely buy them without a discount.
"Discount campaign" is not a set of words I've seen before. I also think "[...] without any sort of discount" sounds good too.
The price for an adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, USD, and would enables you to sign up for two months' of Netflix.
The price for an adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars USD, and would enable you to sign up for two months' of Netflix.
Alternatively: "The prices for adults is [...]"
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Good work!
Sept. 20, 2020
Thank you!
Movie ticket iss are so expensive that I rarely buy ithem without any discount campaign.
Movie tickets are so expensive that I rarely buy them without any discount campaign.
The price for an adult ticket is 1,900 yYen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, which would enables you to sign up for two months' Netflix.
The price for an adult ticket is 1,900 Yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, which would enable you to sign up for two months' Netflix.
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Movie ticket Movie tickets Movie tickets It is more common for titles with only common nouns to either make them plural ("Movie tickets") or place an article in the front ("A Movie Ticket/The Movie Ticket"). I would make it plural here since you are talking about movie tickets in general. |
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Movie ticket is so expensive that I rarely buy it without any discount campaign.
Movie ticket
Movie ticket "Discount campaign" is not a set of words I've seen before. I also think "[...] without any sort of discount" sounds good too. |
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The price for adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, enables you to sign up for two months' Netflix.
The price for an adult ticket is 1,900
The price for an adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars Alternatively: "The prices for adults is [...]"
The price for an adult is 1,900 yen, which is equivalent to 18 dollars, That's the variant which sounds most natural to me. |
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