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Enough sleeping

Recently,I can't sleep enough,Because factorio is very fun.
I started it game yesterday.
It game is dangerous.
It is make me happy and not health.
I can't stop playing game.

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Enough sleeping


Enough sleeping Enough sleep

EI can't get enough sleeping I can't get enough sleep

Enough sInsufficient Sleeping Insufficient Sleep

More natural to use the noun "sleep" in the title. "Insufficient" means "not enough, and is more natural when you're talking about lacking sleep.

Enough sleeping Enough sleep

Recently,I can't sleep enough,Because factorio is very fun.


Recently, I can'thaven't been able to sleep enough,B because fFactorio is very fun. Recently, I haven't been able to sleep enough, because Factorio is very fun.

Commas require spaces after them in English. Unless it's a proper noun, the subject "I," or the start of a sentence, every word is lowercase (so "because" isn't capitalized, but Factorio is, because it's a proper noun referring to a specific game.) "To be able to" is better than "can't" in this context, because "can't" can't be inflected in the present perfect tense (which is what this needs.)

Recently, I can't sleepget enough,B sleep, because fFactorio is very fun. Recently, I can't get enough sleep, because Factorio is very fun.

Don't forget to add space after commas. "Because" is in the middle of the sentence, so it is better to keep the first letter 'b' small. Factorio is a title, so it should have a capital first letter. It is more natural to say "I can't get enough sleep" rather than "I can't sleep enough".

Recently, I can'thaven't been able to sleep enough,B because factorio is veryI've been playing a game called "Factorio", which is a lot of fun. Recently, I haven't been able to sleep enough because I've been playing a game called "Factorio", which is a lot of fun.

- A comma always has a space after it. - The original sentence has a gap in logic. - "Because" is not capitalized in the middle of a sentence.

Recently,I can' I'm not sleeping enough,B because factorio is very fun. Recently, I'm not sleeping enough, because factorio is very fun.

Recently, I can'thaven't been able to sleep enough,B because fFactorio is very fun. Recently, I haven't been able to sleep enough because Factorio is very fun.

You can also use "Lately"

RecentLately, I can't sleep enough,B because factorio is very fun. Lately I can't sleep enough, because factorio is very fun.

Or: "Lately I can't get enough sleep, since factorio is very fun." "Recently" works, but "lately" sounds more natural.

I started it game yesterday.


I started it game yesterday. I started it yesterday.

You could use "it" or "the game" here, but not both simultaneously.

I started it yesterday. OR I started the game yesterday. I started it yesterday. OR I started the game yesterday.

The word 'it' is used to replace nouns (名詞), objects, ideas, etc. that you have already mentioned. You would be using 'it' to refer to Factorio, which you have mentioned. You do not need to add any nouns after 'it'. Alternatively, you can say "the game" instead of "it", if you still want to use the noun, in case people do not know Factorio is a game and you want to help them understand that it is a game. :)

I started it gameplaying it yesterday. I started playing it yesterday.

I started ithis game yesterday. I started this game yesterday.

"It" is a pronoun, it would replace the noun ("game") entirely like "I started it yesterday". It's like これ "This" is an article with a meaning like この

I started ithe game yesterday. I started the game yesterday.

I started ithe game yesterday. I started the game yesterday.

It game is dangerous.


ItThe game is dangerous. The game is dangerous.

Same here.

ItThe game is dangerous. The game is dangerous.

Same reason as before, use "the" before nouns.

It game is dangerous. It is dangerous.

A subject can't have two subjects. Choose between "It" and "The game".

ItThis game is dangerous. This game is dangerous.

ItThe game is dangerous. The game is dangerous.

You can combine the previous two sentences like: "I started the game yesterday and it is dangerous."

ItThe game is dangerous. The game is dangerous.

It is make me happy and not healthy.


I can't stop playing game.


I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.

I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.

Same reason as before, use "the" before nouns.

I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.

You can't have a singular counted noun (like "game") that's not preceded by "a" or "the".

I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game.

I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game.

I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.

You can also use "this" instead of "the", but the sentence is not grammatical without one or the other.

It is make me happy and not health.


It is makes me happy and is not healthy. It makes me happy and is not healthy.

"Healthy" is the adjective you want here: "health" is a noun.

It ismakes me so happy, that it's unhealthy. OR It makes me happy and, but it is not healthy. It makes me so happy, that it's unhealthy. OR It makes me happy, but it is not healthy.

「このゲームをすると嬉しすぎて、不健康になります」っと言う意味ですか? If that is the case, I added "so" before the adjective, to further emphasize the effect. OR Statement #1: It makes me happy. Statement #2: It is not healthy. Using "but" instead of "and" to connect the two statements, will convey the contrast a lot better. So, the end result is: "It makes me happy, but it is not healthy."

It is make me happy andgives me excitement, but not health. It gives me excitement, but not health.

- A verb like "is" is not used with the bare form of a verb (like "make"). - "Happy" is a positive word, but you're expressing negative feelings about your situation.

It is makes me happy andbut not healthy. It makes me happy but not healthy.

"healthy" is the adjective of "health". Since you're drawing a contrast between "happy" (a good thing) and "not healthy" (a bad thing), it's more natural to use a contrasting conjunction like "but" here.

It is makes me happy andbut not healthy. It makes me happy but not healthy.

It is makes me happy andbut not healthy. It makes me happy but not healthy.

Or: "It is making me happy but not healthy." "health" is a noun, "healthy" is an adjective. Using "and" is okay, but using "but" is better when two things are different from one another. ("Happy" is good, but "not healthy" is bad)

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