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Recently,I can't sleep enough,Because factorio is very fun.
I started it game yesterday.
It game is dangerous.
It is make me happy and not health.
I can't stop playing game.
RecentLately, I can't sleep enough,B because factorio is very fun.
Lately I can't sleep enough, because factorio is very fun.
Or: "Lately I can't get enough sleep, since factorio is very fun."
"Recently" works, but "lately" sounds more natural.
I started ithe game yesterday.
I started the game yesterday.
ItThe game is dangerous.
The game is dangerous.
It is makes me happy andbut not healthy.
It makes me happy but not healthy.
Or: "It is making me happy but not healthy."
"health" is a noun, "healthy" is an adjective.
Using "and" is okay, but using "but" is better when two things are different from one another. ("Happy" is good, but "not healthy" is bad)
I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.
You can also use "this" instead of "the", but the sentence is not grammatical without one or the other.
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Good job! :-)
Enough sleeping
Enough sleep
Recently, I can'thaven't been able to sleep enough,B because fFactorio is very fun.
Recently, I haven't been able to sleep enough because Factorio is very fun.
You can also use "Lately"
I started ithe game yesterday.
I started the game yesterday.
ItThe game is dangerous.
The game is dangerous.
You can combine the previous two sentences like: "I started the game yesterday and it is dangerous."
It is makes me happy andbut not healthy.
It makes me happy but not healthy.
I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game.
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Factorio is, indeed, extremely addictive and fun! Make sure to drink water and get sleep! :D
Enough sInsufficient Sleeping
Insufficient Sleep
More natural to use the noun "sleep" in the title. "Insufficient" means "not enough, and is more natural when you're talking about lacking sleep.
Recently,I can' I'm not sleeping enough,B because factorio is very fun.
Recently, I'm not sleeping enough, because factorio is very fun.
I started ithis game yesterday.
I started this game yesterday.
"It" is a pronoun, it would replace the noun ("game") entirely like "I started it yesterday". It's like これ
"This" is an article with a meaning like この
ItThis game is dangerous.
This game is dangerous.
It is makes me happy andbut not healthy.
It makes me happy but not healthy.
"healthy" is the adjective of "health".
Since you're drawing a contrast between "happy" (a good thing) and "not healthy" (a bad thing), it's more natural to use a contrasting conjunction like "but" here.
I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game.
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In English, sometimes Factorio gets given the nickname "Cracktorio" - the "crack" bit is a reference to a highly addictive and illegal drug, which is meant to highlight how often people spend more time than they mean to on the game.
Enough sleeping
Enough sleep
Recently, I can'thaven't been able to sleep enough,B because fFactorio is very fun.
Recently, I haven't been able to sleep enough, because Factorio is very fun.
Commas require spaces after them in English.
Unless it's a proper noun, the subject "I," or the start of a sentence, every word is lowercase (so "because" isn't capitalized, but Factorio is, because it's a proper noun referring to a specific game.)
"To be able to" is better than "can't" in this context, because "can't" can't be inflected in the present perfect tense (which is what this needs.)
I started it game yesterday.
I started it yesterday.
You could use "it" or "the game" here, but not both simultaneously.
ItThe game is dangerous.
The game is dangerous.
Same here.
It is makes me happy and is not healthy.
It makes me happy and is not healthy.
"Healthy" is the adjective you want here: "health" is a noun.
I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.
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This is good and rather comprehensible, just make sure you work on your articles and usage of adjectives!
EI can't get enough sleeping
I can't get enough sleep
Recently, I can'thaven't been able to sleep enough,B because factorio is veryI've been playing a game called "Factorio", which is a lot of fun.
Recently, I haven't been able to sleep enough because I've been playing a game called "Factorio", which is a lot of fun.
- A comma always has a space after it.
- The original sentence has a gap in logic.
- "Because" is not capitalized in the middle of a sentence.
I started it gameplaying it yesterday.
I started playing it yesterday.
It game is dangerous.
It is dangerous.
A subject can't have two subjects. Choose between "It" and "The game".
It is make me happy andgives me excitement, but not health.
It gives me excitement, but not health.
- A verb like "is" is not used with the bare form of a verb (like "make").
- "Happy" is a positive word, but you're expressing negative feelings about your situation.
I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.
You can't have a singular counted noun (like "game") that's not preceded by "a" or "the".
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With any luck, you'll get bored of the game and stop playing it. Then you can spend more time on LangCorrect. :)
Recently, I can't sleepget enough,B sleep, because fFactorio is very fun.
Recently, I can't get enough sleep, because Factorio is very fun.
Don't forget to add space after commas.
"Because" is in the middle of the sentence, so it is better to keep the first letter 'b' small.
Factorio is a title, so it should have a capital first letter.
It is more natural to say "I can't get enough sleep" rather than "I can't sleep enough".
I started it yesterday. OR I started the game yesterday. I started it yesterday. OR I started the game yesterday.
The word 'it' is used to replace nouns (名詞), objects, ideas, etc. that you have already mentioned.
You would be using 'it' to refer to Factorio, which you have mentioned.
You do not need to add any nouns after 'it'.
Alternatively, you can say "the game" instead of "it", if you still want to use the noun, in case people do not know Factorio is a game and you want to help them understand that it is a game. :)
ItThe game is dangerous.
The game is dangerous.
Same reason as before, use "the" before nouns.
It ismakes me so happy, that it's unhealthy. OR It makes me happy and, but it is not healthy.
It makes me so happy, that it's unhealthy. OR It makes me happy, but it is not healthy.
「このゲームをすると嬉しすぎて、不健康になります」っと言う意味ですか?
If that is the case, I added "so" before the adjective, to further emphasize the effect.
OR
Statement #1: It makes me happy.
Statement #2: It is not healthy.
Using "but" instead of "and" to connect the two statements, will convey the contrast a lot better.
So, the end result is: "It makes me happy, but it is not healthy."
I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game.
Same reason as before, use "the" before nouns.
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Great work! Just need a little refinement on articles.
I recommend writing in the "native text" box so that those of us who speak a little Japanese can further understand your intentions and give better feedback.
My boyfriend also loves Factorio, so I can understand why it is so addicting. Please take care of yourself!☺️
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Enough sleeping
Enough sleep
More natural to use the noun "sleep" in the title. "Insufficient" means "not enough, and is more natural when you're talking about lacking sleep.
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Recently,I can't sleep enough,Because factorio is very fun.
Recently, I Commas require spaces after them in English. Unless it's a proper noun, the subject "I," or the start of a sentence, every word is lowercase (so "because" isn't capitalized, but Factorio is, because it's a proper noun referring to a specific game.) "To be able to" is better than "can't" in this context, because "can't" can't be inflected in the present perfect tense (which is what this needs.)
Recently, I can't Don't forget to add space after commas. "Because" is in the middle of the sentence, so it is better to keep the first letter 'b' small. Factorio is a title, so it should have a capital first letter. It is more natural to say "I can't get enough sleep" rather than "I can't sleep enough".
Recently, I - A comma always has a space after it. - The original sentence has a gap in logic. - "Because" is not capitalized in the middle of a sentence.
Recently,
Recently, I You can also use "Lately"
Or: "Lately I can't get enough sleep, since factorio is very fun." "Recently" works, but "lately" sounds more natural. |
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I started it game yesterday.
I started it You could use "it" or "the game" here, but not both simultaneously. I started it yesterday. OR I started the game yesterday. I started it yesterday. OR I started the game yesterday. The word 'it' is used to replace nouns (名詞), objects, ideas, etc. that you have already mentioned. You would be using 'it' to refer to Factorio, which you have mentioned. You do not need to add any nouns after 'it'. Alternatively, you can say "the game" instead of "it", if you still want to use the noun, in case people do not know Factorio is a game and you want to help them understand that it is a game. :)
I started
I started "It" is a pronoun, it would replace the noun ("game") entirely like "I started it yesterday". It's like これ "This" is an article with a meaning like この
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It game is dangerous.
Same here.
Same reason as before, use "the" before nouns.
It A subject can't have two subjects. Choose between "It" and "The game".
You can combine the previous two sentences like: "I started the game yesterday and it is dangerous."
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I can't stop playing game. I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game. Same reason as before, use "the" before nouns. I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game. You can't have a singular counted noun (like "game") that's not preceded by "a" or "the". I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing this game. I can't stop playing the game. I can't stop playing the game. You can also use "this" instead of "the", but the sentence is not grammatical without one or the other. |
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It is make me happy and not health.
It "Healthy" is the adjective you want here: "health" is a noun.
It 「このゲームをすると嬉しすぎて、不健康になります」っと言う意味ですか? If that is the case, I added "so" before the adjective, to further emphasize the effect. OR Statement #1: It makes me happy. Statement #2: It is not healthy. Using "but" instead of "and" to connect the two statements, will convey the contrast a lot better. So, the end result is: "It makes me happy, but it is not healthy."
It - A verb like "is" is not used with the bare form of a verb (like "make"). - "Happy" is a positive word, but you're expressing negative feelings about your situation.
It "healthy" is the adjective of "health". Since you're drawing a contrast between "happy" (a good thing) and "not healthy" (a bad thing), it's more natural to use a contrasting conjunction like "but" here.
It
It Or: "It is making me happy but not healthy." "health" is a noun, "healthy" is an adjective. Using "and" is okay, but using "but" is better when two things are different from one another. ("Happy" is good, but "not healthy" is bad) |
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