May 1, 2022
We went to ride bicycles. Where we wanted to go was the new bridge built across the reservoir. It was near the highway. Last time, we went there it was quite good. Sunshine was nice and we ate bread prepared. We could see the birds that were not seen easily.
But today, it wasn't. There were huge trucks being around. The water is smelly. Dead fishes were floating around the edge of the water.
"It's disgusting."
It reminded the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. The waste water would had been flow out from some of the facillities without being disposed properly. I don't know they had been punished.
"Farmers will do rice farming using this water."
We turned around and came back to home. The wind blew strongly. I don't like the wind in this season. I love the sunshine of Spring but hate the wind. It makes my head hurt. Anyway riding a bicycle reduced my guilt for not to exercise and made me feel better.
"I realize we live in the rural area when we ride bicycles."
At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir.
"It's delicious."
We went to ride bicycles. We went to ride bicycles.
You can also say, "We went bicycle riding" or "We went on a bicycle ride"
Last time, we went there it was quite good.
Last time we went there it was quite good.
Sunshine was nice and we ate bread we had prepared. Sunshine was nice and we ate bread we had prepared.
You can also say "the" sunshine was nice.
But today, it wasn't like that. But today, it wasn't like that.
You should add something after "wasn't". For example: it wasn't good, it wasn't so nice, it wasn't like last time, etc.
There were huge trucks being around.
There were huge trucks around.
I think it would sound good to say "There were huge trucks all over".
"All over"/"all over the place" = everywhere.
"Around" is also okay :) (or "all around", "around the place").
The water iwas smelly.
The water was smelly.
Dead fishes were floating around the edge of the water.
Dead fish were floating around the edge of the water.
It reminded me of the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. It reminded me of the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities.
The waste water would had beenas flowing out from some of the facillities without being disposed properly.
The waste water was flowing out from some of the facilities without being disposed properly.
1. was flowing = You know the waste water was flowing out.
2. might have been flowing, could have been flowing, was probably flowing, was possibly flowing, etc. = You are guessing that the waste water might be flowing out.
I don't know whether they had been punished. I don't know whether they had been punished.
"whether" is like saying "if".
"Farmers will do rice farmingfarm rice using this water.
"Farmers will farm rice using this water.
Anyway riding a bicycle reduced my guilt fover not to exerciseing and made me feel better.
Anyway riding a bicycle reduced my guilt over not exercising and made me feel better.
Often we use the word "over" with "guilt".
Guilt over X = guilt about X, guilt due to X, guilt because of X, etc.
At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir. At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir.
You can also say "an orange that we were planning on snacking on at the reservoir."
to snack on = to eat something as a snack
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Great work!!
Riding toward the new bridge
We went to ride bicycles.
Where we wanted to go was the new bridge built across the reservoir.
It was near the highway.
Last time, we went there, it was quite good.
Last time we went there, it was quite good.
Sunshine was nice and we ate bread preparedthat was prepared ahead of time.
Sunshine was nice and we ate bread that was prepared ahead of time.
We could see the birds that were not seen easily seen.
We could see the birds that were not easily seen.
But today, it wasn't.
There were huge trucks being around.
There were huge trucks around.
The water is smelly.
Dead fishes were floating around the edge of the water.
Dead fish were floating around the edge of the water.
Fish doesn't have to be plural here. Either way works.
It reminded me of the fact that my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. It reminded me of the fact that my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities.
The waste water would had beenhas flowed out ofrom some of the facillities without being disposed properly.
The waste water has flowed out of some of the facilities without being disposed properly.
I doidn't know they had been punished.
I didn't know they had been punished.
"Farmers will do rice farming using this water.
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We turned around and came back to home.
We turned around and came back home.
The wind blew strongly.
I don't like the wind in this season.
I don't like the wind this season.
I love the sunshine of Sspring but hate the wind.
I love the sunshine of spring but hate the wind.
It makes my head hurt.
Anyway, riding a bicycle reduced my guilt for not to exerciseing and made me feel better.
Anyway, riding a bicycle reduced my guilt for not exercising and made me feel better.
"I realize we live in thea rural area when we ride bicycles."
"I realize we live in a rural area when we ride bicycles."
At home, we ate an orange that we werehad planning fored as a snacks at the reservoir.
At home, we ate an orange that we had planned as a snack at the reservoir.
"It's delicious."
Feedback
Well written. I just corrected some minor errors.
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Riding to the new bridge |
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We went to ride bicycles. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We went to ride bicycles. We went to ride bicycles. You can also say, "We went bicycle riding" or "We went on a bicycle ride" |
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Where we wanted to go was the new bridge built across the reservoir. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was near the highway. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last time, we went there it was quite good.
Last time
Last time |
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Sunshine was nice and we ate bread prepared.
Sunshine was nice and we ate bread Sunshine was nice and we ate bread we had prepared. Sunshine was nice and we ate bread we had prepared. You can also say "the" sunshine was nice. |
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We could see the birds that were not seen easily.
We could see the birds that were not |
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But today, it wasn't. This sentence has been marked as perfect! But today, it wasn't like that. But today, it wasn't like that. You should add something after "wasn't". For example: it wasn't good, it wasn't so nice, it wasn't like last time, etc. |
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There were huge trucks being around.
There were huge trucks
There were huge trucks I think it would sound good to say "There were huge trucks all over". "All over"/"all over the place" = everywhere. "Around" is also okay :) (or "all around", "around the place"). |
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The water is smelly. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The water |
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Dead fishes were floating around the edge of the water.
Dead fish Fish doesn't have to be plural here. Either way works.
Dead fish |
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"It's disgusting. |
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It reminded the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. It reminded me of the fact that my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. It reminded me of the fact that my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. It reminded me of the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. It reminded me of the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. |
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The waste water would had been flow out from some of the facillities without being disposed properly.
The waste water
The waste water w 1. was flowing = You know the waste water was flowing out. 2. might have been flowing, could have been flowing, was probably flowing, was possibly flowing, etc. = You are guessing that the waste water might be flowing out. |
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I don't know they had been punished.
I d I don't know whether they had been punished. I don't know whether they had been punished. "whether" is like saying "if". |
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"Farmers will do rice farming using this water. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"Farmers will |
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" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We turned around and came back to home.
We turned around and came back |
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The wind blew strongly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't like the wind in this season.
I don't like the wind |
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I love the sunshine of Spring but hate the wind.
I love the sunshine of |
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It makes my head hurt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway riding a bicycle reduce my guilt for not to exercise and made me feel better. |
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"I realize we live in the rural area when we ride bicycles."
"I realize we live in |
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At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir.
At home, we ate an orange that we At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir. At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir. You can also say "an orange that we were planning on snacking on at the reservoir." to snack on = to eat something as a snack |
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"It's delicious." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Riding toward the new bridge This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway riding a bicycle reduced my guilt for not to exercise and made me feel better.
Anyway, riding a bicycle reduced my guilt for not
Anyway riding a bicycle reduced my guilt Often we use the word "over" with "guilt". Guilt over X = guilt about X, guilt due to X, guilt because of X, etc. |
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