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When I was young, people looked for their partners relying on other people to introduce someone to them.

Their relatives, colleagues, friends, classmates would introduce people to them to date.

So people didn't have much chance to get to know many opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.

Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps. Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.

However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.


Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.

(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.)

It seems unreasonable and contradictory. Can anyone tell me why?

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However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.

Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.

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Oct. 19, 2023

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Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.

However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.

Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.

(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.

Can anyone tell me why?

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Jack

Oct. 19, 2023

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Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.

However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.

Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.

(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.

Can anyone tell me why?

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Jack

Oct. 19, 2023

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However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.

Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.

Can anyone tell me why?

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Jack

Oct. 19, 2023

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When I was young, people looked for their partners relying on other people to introduce someone to them.


When I was young, people looked for their partners by relying on other people to introduce someone to them. When I was young, people looked for partners by relying on other people to introduce someone to them.

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When I was young, people relied on other people to introduce partners to them.

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Their relatives, colleagues, friends, classmates would introduce people to them to date.


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So people didn't have much chance to get to know many opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.


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So people didn't have muchany chances to get to know many people of the opposite sex people, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later. So people didn't have many chances to get to know many people of the opposite sex, yet they could still get married at the right age and fewer of them got divorced later.

As an American, I would write "opposite gender" instead of "opposite sex"

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Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps.


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Nowadays, it is very easy for young people to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps. Nowadays, it is very easy for young people to get to know opposite sex people, since there are so many social apps.

Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps. Nowadays, it is very easy to get to know opposite sex people for young people, since there are so many social apps.

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Young people can know as many opposite sex people as they want in a day.


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Young people can know as many people of the opposite sex people as they want in a day. Young people can know as many people of the opposite sex as they want in a day.

'In a day, young people can meet...' sounds a bit more native. In English, we only use 'know' for people when we're saying we have met someone before, or asking if someone if they have met another person before.

However, most of them won’t get married at the right age, and will still be single in their late thirties.


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Even after they get married, most of them will get divorced.


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(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.


(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best age to give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory. (In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best age to give birth is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.

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(In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best age to give birth age is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory. (In my opinion, the best age to get married is around twenty-five and the best age to give birth is before thirty.) It seems unreasonable and contradictory.

Can anyone tell me why?


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