Feb. 7, 2021
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DJ Soda has shared a video of herself in a hot bikini that makes people forget the cold.
The 32-year-old musician posted a video of herself in a bikini, presumably filmed before the pandemic began, on her Instagram early this morning. The caption says, “Do you like the sound of the beach?”
In the shared video, DJ Soda, in a pink bikini, poses and smiles in front of a camera while at a beach.
DJ Soda, a Korean DJ who boasts more than 4 million Instagram followers, recently released a future bass-oriented track “Shooting Star” last August.
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DJ Soda has shared a video of herself in a hot bikini that makesis making people forget the cold.
DJ Soda has shared a video of herself in a hot bikini that is making people forget the cold.
I feel like "is making" is more natural than "makes" here.
The 32-year-old musician posted a video of herself in a bikini, presumably filmed before the pandemic began, on her Instagram early this morning.
The caption says, “Do you like the sound of the beach?”
In the shared video, DJ Soda, in a pink bikini, poses and smiles in front of a camera while at a beach.
DJ Soda, a Korean DJ who boasts more than 4 million Instagram followers, recently released a future bass-oriented track “Shooting Star” last August.
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Feb. 7, 2021
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DJ Soda has shared a video of herself in a hot bikini that makes people forget the cold.
DJ Soda has shared a video of herself in a hot bikini that I feel like "is making" is more natural than "makes" here. |
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The 32-year-old musician posted a video of herself in a bikini, presumably filmed before the pandemic began, on her Instagram early this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The caption says, “Do you like the sound of the beach?” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the shared video, DJ Soda, in a pink bikini, poses and smiles in front of a camera while at a beach. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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DJ Soda, a Korean DJ who boasts more than 4 million Instagram followers, recently released a future bass-oriented track “Shooting Star” last August. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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