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Malaria is a souvenir of West Africa.
If you have been to West Africa, Mali or Côte d'Ivoire and other countries, you are unable to escape malaria.
My uncle got diagnosed with lung cancer after he returned from Mali.
He worked in Mali for six years and was infected with malaria many times.
After exhausting years in Mali, he lost his health.
Don't envy him for making a lot of money, because he was taken ill.
In his later years, he spent time recuperating at home.
疟疾是西非的纪念品。
如果你去过西非，马利或象牙海岸等国家，你难逃疟疾。
我叔叔从马利回国之后，患上了肺癌。
在马利工作了六年，他感染了好多次的疟疾。
在马利度过了漫长的岁月之后，他的身体状况每况愈下。
不要羡慕他赚了大钱，因为他患了病。
晚年的生活，他在家养病。
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Malaria
Malaria is a souvenir of West Africa. Malaria is a souvenir of West Africa.
I think "can be" would fit here, as it is not 100% certain that you would get malaria if you went there.
If you have beengo to West Africa, Mali or Côte d'Ivoire and other countries, you are unable to escape malaria.
If you go to West Africa, Mali or Côte d'Ivoire and other countries, you are unable to escape malaria.
Or: have been --> would have been unable to escape
This is also a very certain sentence, maybe "it is difficult to escape malaria" would soften it a bit?
My uncle got diagnosed with lung cancer after he returned from Mali.
He worked in Mali for six years and was infected with malaria many times.
After many exhausting years in Mali, he lost his health. After many exhausting years in Mali, he lost his health.
To exhaust something --> to use it up, to run out
It kind of sounds like he used up all his years in Mali
Don't envy him for making a lot of money, because he was taken ill.
In his later years, he spent all his time recuperating at home. In his later years, he spent all his time recuperating at home.
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Malaria is a souvenir of West Africa. Malaria is a souvenir of West Africa. Malaria is a souvenir of West Africa. I think "can be" would fit here, as it is not 100% certain that you would get malaria if you went there. |
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If you have been to West Africa, Mali or Côte d'Ivoire and other countries, you are unable to escape from malaria. |
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My uncle got lung cancer after he returned from Mali. |
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He worked in Mali for six years and was infected with malaria many times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After exhausting years in Mali, he lost his health. After many exhausting years in Mali, he lost his health. After many exhausting years in Mali, he lost his health. To exhaust something --> to use it up, to run out It kind of sounds like he used up all his years in Mali |
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Don't envy him for making a lot of money, because he was taken ill. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In his later years, he recuperated at home. |
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My uncle got diagnosed with lung cancer after he returned from Mali. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In his later years, he spent time recuperating at home. In his later years, he spent all his time recuperating at home. In his later years, he spent all his time recuperating at home. |
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If you have been to West Africa, Mali or Côte d'Ivoire and other countries, you are unable to escape malaria.
If you Or: have been --> would have been unable to escape This is also a very certain sentence, maybe "it is difficult to escape malaria" would soften it a bit? |
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