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Are shanghai People Arrogant? (4)

I have sauntered on Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times. often saw some people arguing loudly over something, most cases happened between a sales and a customer. I remember a customer who explained to the people loudly around him complained that the sales bully on him, he had asked the sales three times for one product, but the sales left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the sales.
One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where adjacent to a shopping street. A crowd of people has already filled the room. Some famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented on the selling counters. Of course, they were all replicas. They not only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags. I was not surprised by the products, what made me surprised was that there were many foreigners.
My colleague explained the reason to me, "Do you think all foreigners are rich? Actually, many of them also want to save money, it's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries. A real Omega worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only cost 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, only costs 150Yuan ), why not?"

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Of course, they were all replicas.

My colleague explained the reason to me, "Do you think all foreigners are rich?

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ご精読ありがとうございます!

A crowd of people has already filled the room.

Some famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented on the selling counters.

Of course, they were all replicas.

They not only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags.

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A crowd of people has already filled the room.

Of course, they were all replicas.

I was not surprised by the products, what made me surprised was that there were many foreigners.

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Are shanghai People Arrogant? (4)


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Are sShanghai People Arrogant? (4) Are Shanghai People Arrogant? (4)

I have sauntered on Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times.


I have sauntered along Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times. I have sauntered along Nanjing Road (a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times.

I have saunteredbeen on Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times. I have been on Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times.

sauntered is not such a popular verb

I have sauntered odown Nanjing Road ( a busy shopping street in Shanghai ) many times. I have sauntered down Nanjing Road (a busy shopping street in Shanghai) many times.

"To saunter down" is how we use it in the US. We don't use spaces to separate parentheses.

often saw some people arguing loudly over something, most cases happened between a sales and a customer.


I often sawee some people arguing loudly over something, most cases happened between a sales andly salespeople with a customer. I often see some people arguing loudly over something, mostly salespeople with a customer.

Narrative present tense

often I saw some people arguing loudly over something, most cases it happeneds between a sales and a customer. often I saw some people arguing loudly over something, most cases it happens between a sales and a customer.

remember to always mention the person doing the action

I often saw some people arguing loudly over something,. In most cases, it happened between a salesperson and a customer. I often saw people arguing loudly over something. In most cases, it happened between a salesperson and a customer.

I remember a customer who explained to the people loudly around him complained that the sales bully on him, he had asked the sales three times for one product, but the sales left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the sales.


I remember a customer who excomplained loudly to the people loudly around him complained that the salesperson was bully oning him, and that he had asked the salesperson three times for onea product, but the salesperson left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the salesabout this to the manager. I remember a customer who complained loudly to the people around him that the salesperson was bullying him, and that he had asked the salesperson three times for a product, but the salesperson left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted about this to the manager.

you can also say salesman/saleswoman if you want to specify the gender. Or just employee to be generic. 'Manager' is just a guess, but 'sale' isn't a person :)

I remember a customer who explained to the people loudly around him complained that the salesman bully on him, he had asked for the sales three times forabout one product, but the salesman left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the sales manager. I remember a customer who explained to the people loudly around him complained that the salesman bully him, he had asked for the sales three times about one product, but the salesman left him alone without any excuse, so he ranted to the sales manager.

Sales is not a person. If you are talking about the person who makes the sale, it's called salesman.

I remember a customer who excomplained loudly to the people loudly around him complained that the sales bully on him, hperson tried to bully him. He had asked the salesperson three times for one product, but the sales left him alone without any excuseperson ignored him for no reason, so he ranted abouto the salesperson. I remember a customer who complained loudly to the people around him that the salesperson tried to bully him. He had asked the salesperson three times for one product, but the salesperson ignored him for no reason, so he ranted about the salesperson.

Try to keep your adverbs and prepositional phrases close to the verbs or nouns they modify.

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where adjacent to a shopping street.


One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where adjacent to a shopping streetip/mall. One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley adjacent to a shopping strip/mall.

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley wherethat/which is adjacent to a shopping street. One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley that/which is adjacent to a shopping street.

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley whereich was adjacent to a shopping street. One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley which was adjacent to a shopping street.

One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where adjacent to a shopping street was adjacent to it. One day, my colleague led me to a house in an alley where a shopping street was adjacent to it.

A crowd of people has already filled the room.


A crowd of people hasd already filled the room. A crowd of people had already filled the room.

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A crowd of people hasd already filled the room. A crowd of people had already filled the room.

This sentence is past tense.

Some famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented on the selling counters.


Some famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented oin the selling counterdisplay cabinets. Some famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented in the display cabinets.

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Some fFamous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented on the sellingales counters. Famous brand watches like Omega, Rolex, Zenith, and other magnificent watches were presented on the sales counters.

Since you list the type of watches, there's no need for "some" to modify "watches."

Of course, they were all replicas.


Of course, they were all replicaknock-offs. Of course, they were all knock-offs.

'knock-offs' / 'fakes'. Replica has a more positive connotation

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They not only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags.


They not only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags. They not only sell watches, but also CD-burning software, and fashion bags.

They nodon't only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags. They don't only sell watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags.

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They not only sellold watches, but also some CD-burning software, and fashion bags. They not only sold watches, but also some CD-burning software and fashion bags.

I was not surprised by the products, what made me surprised was that there were many foreigners.


I was not surprised by the products, but what made me surprised me was that there were many foreigners. I was not surprised by the products, but what surprised me was that there were many foreigners.

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I was not surprised by the products, w. What made me surprised was that there were many foreigners. I was not surprised by the products. What made me surprised was that there were many foreigners.

I was not surprised by the products, w. What made me surprised me was that there were many foreigners. I was not surprised by the products. What surprised me was that there were many foreigners.

My colleague explained the reason to me, "Do you think all foreigners are rich?


My colleague explained the reason to me,: "Do you think all foreigners are rich?" he asked me. My colleague explained the reason to me: "Do you think all foreigners are rich?" he asked me.

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Actually, many of them also want to save money, it's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries.


Actually, many of them also want to save money, it's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicaknock-off products in their own countries. Actually, many of them also want to save money, it's difficult to buy cheap and well-made knock-off products in their own countries.

Actually, many of them also want to save money, i. It's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries. Actually, many of them also want to save money. It's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries.

Actually, many of them also want to save money, i. It's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries. Actually, many of them also want to save money. It's difficult to buy cheap and well-made replicas in their own countries.

A real Omega worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only cost 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, only costs 150Yuan ), why not?"


A real Omega watch is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replicaknock-off one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150 Yuan ), why not?" A real Omega watch is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a knock-off one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150 Yuan ), why not?"

A real Omega is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, only costs 150Yuan ), why not?" A real Omega is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, only costs 150Yuan ), why not?"

A real Omega isworth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica onewill only cost 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150Yuan ), why not?". How come? A real Omega isworth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica will only cost 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150Yuan ). How come?

A real Omega is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica one only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150 Yuan ), so why not?" A real Omega is worth about 10,000 Yuan, but a replica only costs 300 Yuan (I know in Guangzhou, it only costs 150 Yuan), so why not?"

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