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In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city. Every time I go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always feel sad because the village hasn’t even changed a little since I left it. In the following decade when I got a job, it was still in its old shape that I remembered at my young age. Maybe in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quick. Each family built a new house with three or four floors and the roads were all renewed to cement. Not to mention tap water, telephones, networks and cars. Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike. Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feel sorrow. However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions. But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect. It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside. In a word, the countryside has developed really fast in recent years. I am very glad to see these.

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However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions.

It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside.

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My village

In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city.

In the following decade when I got a job, it was still in its old shape that I remembered at my young age.

Maybe in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quick.

Each family built a new house with three or four floors and the roads were all renewed to cement.

Not to mention tap water, telephones, networks and cars.

Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike.

Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feel sorrow.

However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions.

But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect.

It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside.

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My village

In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city.

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In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city.


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Every time I go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always feel sad because the village hasn’t even changed a little since I left it.


Every time I’d go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always feelt sad because the village hasdn’t even changed a little since I left it. Every time I’d go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always felt sad because the village hadn’t even changed a little since I left it.

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In the following decade when I got a job, it was still in its old shape that I remembered at my young age.


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In the following decade when I got a job, it was still in its old shape that I remembered at my young age, my village still remained the same as during my childhood. In the following decade, my village still remained the same as during my childhood.

Maybe in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quick.


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MaybeThen in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quickly. Then in the 2010’s, our village started to change quickly.

Each family built a new house with three or four floors and the roads were all renewed to cement.


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Each family had built a new house with three or four floors and the. The dirt roads were all renewed topaved with cement. Each family had built a new house with three or four floors. The dirt roads were paved with cement.

Not to mention tap water, telephones, networks and cars.


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Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike.


Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, w. Wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike. Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity. Wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike.

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Back inThese rapid changes made me think back to the old days, whaten we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk andwalked on mud roads as we didn’ not even have a bikes, and had no electricity. These rapid changes made me think back to the old days, when we lived in a thatched cottage, walked on mud roads as we did not even have bikes, and had no electricity.

Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feel sorrow.


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Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feelwould feel a great sense of sorrow. Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I would feel a great sense of sorrow.

However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions.


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But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect.


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But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect. But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect.

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It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside.


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In a word, the countryside has developed really fast in recent years.


In aother words, the countryside has developed really fast in recent years. In other words, the countryside has developed really fast in recent years.

In a word, the countryside has developed really fast in recentconclusion, I’m very glad to see the rapid development in my village in the past 10 years. In conclusion, I’m very glad to see the rapid development in my village in the past 10 years.

I am very glad to see these.


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