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Giuliano Da Empoli

I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli. I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture". The personage attracted me, so that I decided to write some words about him.

Da Empoli possesses the Swiss nationality. He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he got a law degree. Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then.

Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government. He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationship among the European countries.

Though the Swiss has been active on the political field, I would rather emphasize his labour as a writer on the same area. He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focusing on Italian politics, the USA or China. This year, he has published a work about China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years.

I have enjoyed the lecture of his previous book: the engineers of chaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latests can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented. Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a next writting

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Giuliano Da Empoli

I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli.

Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government.

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jfartogra

July 19, 2022

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I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli.

I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture".

He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he got a law degree.

Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then.

Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government.

He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationship among the European countries.

This year, he has published a work about China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years.

Giuliano Da Empoli


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I would like to write some words about the writer and advisor Giuliano Da Empoli.


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I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture".


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I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France cCulture". I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France Culture".

I have discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on the website "France culture" the website. I discovered him by chance when listening to a podcast on "France culture" the website.

The personage attracted me, so that I decided to write some words about him.


The personage attrac interested me, so that I decided to write some words about him. The person interested me, so I decided to write about him.

"personage" should be "person" and "interested" sounds more natural than "attracted". removed some unnecessary words also!

The personage attracted me, so thatI thought he was cool, so I decided to write some words about him. I thought he was cool, so I decided to write some words about him.

TheHis personage attracted me, so that I decided to write some wordsmuch so I had to write about him. His personage attracted me, so much so I had to write about him.

Implies passion.

Da Empoli possesses the Swiss nationality.


Da Empoli possesses the Swiss nationalityis Swiss. Da Empoli is Swiss.

Da Empoli possesses the Swiss nationality. Da Empoli possesses Swiss nationality.

He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he got a law degree.


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He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he gotacquired a law degree. He was born in Paris and raised in Rome, where he acquired a law degree.

Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then.


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Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since then. Furthermore, he pursued advanced studies in political science in Paris, where he has been living since.

No need to use “then”; which is implied by the use of past verbs, and since implies a continuing action in the present.

Da Empoli has worked as an advisor for the Italian government.


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He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationship among the European countries.


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He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is theo enhancement of the relationship among thebetween European countries. He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is to enhance the relationship between European countries.

He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationships among thest European countries. He is the founder of the think-tank Volta, whose aim is the enhancement of the relationships amongst European countries.

Though the Swiss has been active on the political field, I would rather emphasize his labour as a writer on the same area.


Though the Swiss has been active on the political field, I would rather emphasize his labourwork as a writer on the same area. Though the Swiss has been active on the political field, I would rather emphasize his work as a writer on the same area.

"labour" isn't wrong but it's more natural to say "work"

Though the Swiss has been active oin the political fieldarena, I would rather emphasize his labourwork as a writer on the same area. Though the Swiss has been active in the political arena, I would rather emphasize his work as a writer on the same area.

Though the Swiss has been rather active oin the political field, I would rather emphasize his labour as a writer oin the same area. Though the Swiss has been rather active in the political field, I would rather emphasize his labour as a writer in the same area.

Gorgeous sentence, just grammar!

He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focusing on Italian politics, the USA or China.


He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focusing on Italian politics, the USA orand China. He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focusing on Italian politics, the USA and China.

changed "and" to "or"

He is the author of more than a dozen essays on the matter, focualising on Italian politics, the USA or China, American and Chinese politics. He is the author of more than a dozen essays, focalising on Italian, American and Chinese politics.

Grammar and more sophisticated phrasing

This year, he has published a work about China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years.


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This year, he has published a work about China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years. This year, he published a work about China, discussing its evolution over the last 20 years.

This year, he has published a work aboutbased on China, disscussing its evolution over the last 20 years. This year, he published a work based on China, discussing its evolution over the last 20 years.

I have enjoyed the lecture of his previous book: the engineers of chaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latests can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented.


I have enjoyed the lecture of his previous book: the engineers of chaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latestster can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented. I have enjoyed the lecture of his previous book: the engineers of chaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latter can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented.

changed "latests" to "latter" which is what I think you meant.

I have enjoyed the lecturmessage of his previous book: t, The eEngineers of cChaos, since it is focused on the interplay between politics and social networksmedia and how the latestster can play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented marketing campaigns. I enjoyed the message of his previous book, The Engineers of Chaos, since it focused on the interplay between politics and social media and how the latter can play a crucial role in order to carry out highly user-oriented marketing campaigns.

I have thoroughly enjoyed the lecture ofregarding his previous book: (the engineers of chaos), since it is focufocaliseds on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the latests canformer can potentially play a crucial role in order to carry out marketing campaigns highly user-oriented marking campaigns. I have thoroughly enjoyed the lecture regarding his previous book (the engineers of chaos), since it focalises on the interplay between politics and social networks and how the former can potentially play a crucial role to carry out highly user-oriented marking campaigns.

Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a next writting


Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a nextfuture writting Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for future writing

no need to say "a", and "future" is better than "next"

Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a next piece of writting. Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a next piece of writing.

Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a his next writtingentry. Nevertheless, this can be a good theme for a his next entry.

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