July 19, 2024
The rest of my day
Yesterday, after the work, I went to the Vallarino Pool. Weather is wet, however I decided to swim. I arrived to pool aorund 6pm and inmediately I got dressed to enter the water. The water was so cold, but I was already inside, so I swam 600 mt easily without hurry.
I enjoyed every meter traveled. It was very pleasent.
At 7 pm I went out the pool and I walked to dressing rooms. I put on my clothes and I went out from the pool.
I took the bus and I arrived at 7:30 pm. After, my childs, my wife and I went out to Ferroviaria Park and we walked around 50 minutes.
We back to home around 9pm and we got to bed inmeddiately.
It was a great afternoon and evening.
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The rest of my day
Yesterday, after the work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
Yesterday after work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
WThe weather iwas wet, however I decided to swim.
The weather was wet, however I decided to swim.
I arrived togot to the pool aoround 6pm and inmmediately I got dressed to enter the water.
I got to the pool around 6pm and immediately dressed to enter the water.
The water was sovery cold, but I was already inside, so I swam 600 mttook my time easily swithout hurrymming 600m.
The water was very cold, but I was already in, so I took my time easily swimming 600m.
I enjoyed every meter traveledinch of it.
I enjoyed every inch of it.
It was very pleaseant.
It was very pleasant.
At 7 pm I wengot out of the pool and I walked to the dressing rooms.
At 7 pm I got out of the pool and walked to the dressing rooms.
I put on my clothes on and I went out from the poolleft.
I put my clothes on and left.
I took the bus home and I arrived at 7:30 pm.
I took the bus home and arrived at 7:30 pm.
After,Then my childs, myren, wife and I went out to Ferroviaria Park and we walked around for 50 minutes.
Then my children, wife and I went out to Ferroviaria Park and walked around for 50 minutes.
We got back to home around 9pm and we gont to bed inmmeddiately.
We got back home around 9pm and went to bed immediately.
It was a great afternoon and evening.
The rest of my day
Yesterday, after the work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
Yesterday, after work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
WThe weather is wetwas rainy, however I decided to swim.
The weather was rainy, however I decided to swim.
I arrived toat the pool aoround 6 pm and inmmediately I got dresschanged to enter the water.
I arrived at the pool around 6 pm and immediately got changed to enter the water.
"6 pm" for consistency with later
The water was so cold, but I was already inside, so I swam 600 mt easily without hurrytook my time swimming 600 meters.
The water was so cold, but I was already inside, so I took my time swimming 600 meters.
I enjoyed every meter traveled.
It was very pleaseant.
It was very pleasant.
At 7 pm I wengot out of the pool and I walked to dressthe changing rooms.
At 7 pm I got out of the pool and walked to the changing rooms.
"dressing room" is used more for like a fitting room
I put on my clothes and I went out fromleft the pool.
I put on my clothes and left the pool.
I took the bus and I arrivedgot home at 7:30 pm.
I took the bus and got home at 7:30 pm.
AfterThen, my childsren, my wife, and I went out to Ferroviaria Park and we walked for around 50 minutes.
Then, my children, my wife, and I went out to Ferroviaria Park and walked for around 50 minutes.
We got back to home around 9 pm and we got to bed inmmeddiately.
We got back home around 9 pm and got to bed immediately.
It was a great afternoon and evening.
Yesterday, after the work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
Yesterday, after work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
Adding "the" in "the work" makes it sound like a special project. "Work" refers generally to your job, while "the work" is referring to a unique type of work.
WThe weather is wetrainy, however I decided to swim.
The weather is rainy, however I decided to swim.
In this case, you should add "the" in front of "weather," since you are referring to a specific weather (the weather in your location). "Rainy" is better than "wet" in the context of the weather. But "wet" still works, I understood the meaning.
I arrived to the pool aoround 6pm and inmmediately I got dressed to enter the water.
I arrived to the pool around 6pm and immediately I got dressed to enter the water.
"The" is added in front of "pool" since you are referring to a specific pool. If you were referring to any pool, you would say "a pool." But you would never say "to pool" since "pool" is a noun that needs an article or possessive noun before it (e.g., "the pool", "my pool").
The water was so cold, but I was already inside the pool, so I swam 600 mtm easily without hurry.
The water was so cold, but I was already in the pool, so I swam 600m easily without hurry.
This sentence is a little awkward. I would say "I was already in the pool" instead of "I was already inside" to make it clearer what you mean. In English, meter is shortened to "m"
I enjoyed every meter traveledthe swim.
I enjoyed the swim.
This is a weird expression in the context of swimming at a pool. I would just say "I enjoyed the swim."
It was very pleaseant.
It was very pleasant.
At 7 pm, I went out of the pool and I walked to the dressing rooms. At 7 pm, I went out of the pool and I walked to the dressing rooms.
I put on my clothes and I went out from the poolleft.
I put on my clothes and I left.
"went out from the pool" and "went out of the pool" (from previous sentence) are too similar and confusing. I would just say "I left" to indicate you left the facility.
I took the bus and I arrived home at 7:30 pm. I took the bus and I arrived home at 7:30 pm.
After, my childs, myren, wife and I went out to Ferroviaria Park, and we walked around for 50 minutes.
After, my children, wife and I went out to Ferroviaria Park, and we walked around for 50 minutes.
We back toreturned home around 9pm and we gowent to bed inmmeddiately.
We returned home around 9pm and we went to bed immediately.
"got to bed" is never used, it's a weird expression. In English, the expression is usually "went to bed" when speaking in the past tense.
It was a great afternoon and evening.
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Overall, great job. Just remember to use articles and possessive nouns ("the", "my", "a", etc.) before some nouns, and make sure the words you choose make sense to the reader given the context.
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Yesterday, after the work, I went to the Vallarino Pool.
Yesterday, after Adding "the" in "the work" makes it sound like a special project. "Work" refers generally to your job, while "the work" is referring to a unique type of work.
Yesterday, after
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Weather is wet, however I decided to swim.
In this case, you should add "the" in front of "weather," since you are referring to a specific weather (the weather in your location). "Rainy" is better than "wet" in the context of the weather. But "wet" still works, I understood the meaning.
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I arrived to pool aorund 6pm and inmediately I got dressed to enter the water.
I arrived to the pool a "The" is added in front of "pool" since you are referring to a specific pool. If you were referring to any pool, you would say "a pool." But you would never say "to pool" since "pool" is a noun that needs an article or possessive noun before it (e.g., "the pool", "my pool").
I arrived "6 pm" for consistency with later
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The water was so cold, but I was already inside, so I swam 600 mt easily without hurry.
The water was so cold, but I was already in This sentence is a little awkward. I would say "I was already in the pool" instead of "I was already inside" to make it clearer what you mean. In English, meter is shortened to "m"
The water was so cold, but I was already inside, so I
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I enjoyed every meter traveled.
I enjoyed This is a weird expression in the context of swimming at a pool. I would just say "I enjoyed the swim." This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It was very pleasent.
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At 7 pm I went out the pool and I walked to dressing rooms. At 7 pm, I went out of the pool and I walked to the dressing rooms. At 7 pm, I went out of the pool and I walked to the dressing rooms.
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I put on my clothes and I went out from the pool.
I put on my clothes and I "went out from the pool" and "went out of the pool" (from previous sentence) are too similar and confusing. I would just say "I left" to indicate you left the facility.
I put on my clothes and
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I took the bus and I arrived at 7:30 pm. I took the bus and I arrived home at 7:30 pm. I took the bus and I arrived home at 7:30 pm.
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After, my childs, my wife and I went out to Ferroviaria Park and we walked around 50 minutes.
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We back to home around 9pm and we got to bed inmeddiately.
We "got to bed" is never used, it's a weird expression. In English, the expression is usually "went to bed" when speaking in the past tense.
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