March 15, 2022
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The nice weather I have always been seeking is a place where the temperature is between 20 and 30 degrees Celsius year round, but there doesn't seem to be one on this planet.
Here I live, the temperature is from -15 in winter to 45 in summer. It has a large temperature range. The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live.
My current plan is that I will live on Hainan island for the rest of my life after I retire because the air there is fresh and it's sunny and warm year round.
Based on my life experience, humans only have 30 years at maximum for hard work. After the age of fifty, people will lose their energy both mentally and physically and they can't do things as effectively as when they were young.
I think enterprising people should do three things: be an official and continuously get promoted, make money, self-improvement in capabilities, and choosing one of them is okay.
Of course, people can just enjoy their lives and do nothing as long as they have enough money and they feel happy.
In short, please never waste time when you are still young. Do what you want and do what you like, but never do what harms humans and our society.
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The nice weather I have always been seeking is a place where the temperature is between 20 and 30 degrees Celsius year round, but there doesn't seem to be one on this planet.
HWhere I live, the temperature is from -15 in winter to 45 in summer.
Where I live, the temperature is from -15 in winter to 45 in summer.
Probably just a spelling mistake.
It has a large temperature range.
The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live.
After the age of fifty, people will lose their energy both mentally and physically and they can't do things as effectively as when they were young.
Of course, people can just enjoy their lives and do nothing as long as they have enough money and they feel happy.
In short, please neverdon't waste time whilen you are still young.
In short, please don't waste time while you are still young.
More of a stylistic choice, to help the sentence read a little better.
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This is really well written and an interesting introspective!
March 16, 2022
Thank you very much.
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The good weather I have always looked for is a place where the temperature is between 20 and 30 degrees Celsius all year round. However there doesn't seem to be one on this planet.
Here where I live, the temperature iranges from -15 in winter to 45 in summer.
Here where I live, the temperature ranges from -15 in winter to 45 in summer.
You could also say "between -15 in winter and 45 in summer"
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There is a large temperature range.
The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live. The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live.
The temperature can vary 15 degrees over a day. This makes it an uncomfortable place to live
My current plan is that I willo live on Hainan island for the rest of my life after I retire because the air there is fresh and it's sunny and warm year round.
My current plan is to live on Hainan island for the rest of my life after I retire because the air there is fresh and it's sunny and warm year round.
Based on my lifeIn my experience, humans only have 30 years at maximum fora maximum of 30 years of hard work.
In my experience, humans only have a maximum of 30 years of hard work.
After the age of fifty, people will lose their energy both mentally and physically and they can't do things as effectively as when they were young.
After the age of fifty, people lose their energy both mentally and physically and they can't do things as effectively as when they were young.
This is just not true! I am 66 and still enjoying my working life! ;-)
I think enterprising people should do these three things:; be an official and continuously getseek promotedion, make money, self-improvement in and improve their capabilities, and c. Choosing one of them iswould be okay.
I think enterprising people should do these three things; be an official and continuously seek promotion, make money and improve their capabilities. Choosing one of them would be okay.
Of course, people can just enjoy their lives and do nothing as long as they have enough money and they feel happy.
Do what you want and do what you like, but never do what harms humans and our society.
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Well done! By the way, I started work at 16 so my working life has been 50 years.
March 15, 2022
Thank you, my brother. Good to hear you are still working. I too hope I can work that long, but I don't feel good when I am over fifty. I hope you are healthy forever.
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The nice weather I have always been seeking is a place where the temperature is between 20 and 30 degrees Celsius year round, but there doesn't seem to be one on this planet.
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Here I live, the temperature is from -15 in winter to 45 in summer.
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It has a large temperature range.
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The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live. The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live. The temperature difference in a day will reach 15 degrees, so I don't think it is a nice place to live. The temperature can vary 15 degrees over a day. This makes it an uncomfortable place to live This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My current plan is that I will live on Hainan island for the rest of my life after I retire because the air there is fresh and it's sunny and warm year round.
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After the age of fifty, people will lose their energy both mentally and physically and they can't do things as effectively as when they were young.
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I think enterprising people should do three things: be an official and continuously get promoted, make money, self-improvement in capabilities, and choosing one of them is okay.
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In short, please never waste time when you are still young.
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