‘Holidays revive the spirit and renew the soul.’ A Discussion ‘Holidays revive the spirit and renew the soul.’ A Discussion

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Nowadays, people pay more and more attention on holidayto vacations, because it is generally believed that holidayvacations revive the spirit and renew the soul. Nowadays, people pay more and more attention to vacations, because it is generally believed that vacations revive the spirit and renew the soul.

I've replaced "holiday" with "vacation" throughout this text, except for the title, because I don't think you're actually talking about "holidays". I explain it more below.

From my perspective, this assumption is correct under specific conditionircumstances. From my perspective, this assumption is correct under specific circumstances.

"specific conditions" works as well, but "circumstances" feels a little better to me.

Generally speaking, holidayvacations are believed to have a meaningful impact on people’s spirits and well-being rather than being merely superficial. Generally speaking, vacations are believed to have a meaningful impact on people’s spirits and well-being rather than being merely superficial.

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However, most of people just squander large amounts of money on accommodation, food and entertainment. However, most people just squander large amounts of money on accommodation, food and entertainment.

If people want to achieve this goal, they should endeavour to do something totally new. If people want to achieve this goal, they should endeavor to do something totally new.

"Endeavour" is the British spelling. Although, it does need the "a" either way. "Endeavor" (or "endeavour") feels odd without a preposition after it. The way I usually use this verb, it goes before another verb, like "endeavor to do..." You might also see "endeavor for [noun]", like "endeavor for something totally new."

Last year, I couldn't stand with the job pressurethe pressure of my job anymore, so I decided to quit my job and then flew to California for a brief holidayvacation. Last year, I couldn't stand the pressure of my job anymore, so I decided to quit my job and then flew to California for a brief vacation.

For a brief "holiday"? What you describe sounds more like a vacation. A holiday is a special, specific event. For Americans, those are days like Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas, Easter, etc. A vacation is when you take time off work, usually (but not always) to travel somewhere and relax, and they have little to do with specific calender days.

After staying in San Francisco for several days, I took three buses to a remote town called Garberville, because I was going to stay in a local farm for a month. After staying in San Francisco for several days, I took three buses to a remote town called Garberville, because I was going to stay in a local farm for a month.

It was a curious and exciteding experience tofor me, because I did some light farm works for athe host from Monday to Friday in exchange for fresh farm produces and cozy accommodation. It was a curious and exciting experience for me, because I did some light farm work for the host from Monday to Friday in exchange for fresh farm produce and cozy accommodation.

The experience itself was not excited, but rather, it filled *you* with excitement. "Work" is only plural when talking about, say, "works of art". "Produce" as a noun is one of those irregular nouns which never has an "-s" plural form.

I still look back fondly on this trip, because it hasd a positive and lifelong influence on my spirit and soul. I still look back fondly on this trip, because it had a positive and lifelong influence on my spirit and soul.

In conclusion, this opinion can combe true under certain conditions. In conclusion, this opinion can be true under certain conditions.

Only after experienceing something meaningful during holidayvacations can people revive their spirits and renew their souls. Only after experiencing something meaningful during vacations can people revive their spirits and renew their souls.

The owner's family treated me warmly and selflessly, f. For example, they invited me to join their family dinners from time to time, they taught me some basic knowledge about flora and fauna and they took me to other nearby coastal towns by car on weekends. The owner's family treated me warmly and selflessly. For example, they invited me to join their family dinners from time to time, they taught me some basic knowledge about flora and fauna and they took me to other nearby coastal towns by car on weekends.

During my stay in the lovely farm, my spirit and soul were comforted because of the host's care, the animals' accompany and the breathtaking scenery. During my stay in the lovely farm, my spirit and soul were comforted because of the host's care, the animals' company and the breathtaking scenery.

I wouldn't have gained this experience if I had travelled in those big cities and followed a standard tourist routine. I wouldn't have gained this experience if I had travelled in those big cities and followed a standard tourist routine.