Jan. 7, 2020
Absent-minded
Last night it snowed for the first time this winter season. Before leaving for work, I had to clear the snow from the car and the entrance of my house.
My wife took the kids to the school this morning because I had to take my car to the repair shop for scheduled servicing. The shop is not very far away from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that can be delivered only the next day. I agreed and immediately forgot about it. So by the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
I walked down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed earlier today. They couldn't give me the car back because they already have disassembled some parts of it.
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Last night it snowed for the first time this winter season.
Last night it snowed for the first time this winter.
The shop is not very far away from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
The shop is not very far from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that canould only be delivered only the next day.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that could only be delivered the next day.
So byBut at the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
But at the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
I walked downhalf an hour to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed to earlier tohat day.
I walked half an hour to the repair shop just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed to earlier that day.
They couldn't give me the car back to me because they had already have disassembled some parts of it.
They couldn't give the car back to me because they had already disassembled some parts of it.
Absent-minded
Last night it snowed for the first time this winter season.
Before leaving for work, I had to clear the snow from the car and the entrance of my house.
My wife took the kids to the school this morning because I had to take my car to the repair shop for scheduled servicing.
My wife took the kids to school this morning because I had to take my car to the repair shop for scheduled servicing.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that can be delivered only the next day.
I agreed and immediately forgot about it.
So by the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
I walked down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed on earlier today. I walked down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed on earlier today.
They couldn't give me the car back because they already haved disassembled some parts of it.
They couldn't give me the car back because they already had disassembled some parts of it.
Absent-minded
Last night it snowed for the first time this winter season.
Last night it snowed for the first time this winter.
Before leaving for work, I had to clear the snow from the car and the entrance of my house.
My wife took the kids to the school this morning because I had to take my car to the repair shop for scheduled servicing.
The shop is not very far away from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
The shop is not very far from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that canould only be delivered only the next day.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a part that could only be delivered the next day.
I agreed and immediately forgot about it.
So byAt the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
At the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
I walked half an hour down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed upon earlier toin the day.
I walked half an hour down to the repair shop just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed upon earlier in the day.
They couldn't give me the car back because they had already have disassembled some parts of it.
They couldn't give me the car back because they had already disassembled some parts of it.
Absent-minded
Last night it snowed for the first time this winter season.
Before leaving for work, I had to clear the snow from the car and the entrance of my house.
My wife took the kids to the school this morning because I had to take my car to the repair shop for scheduled servicing.
The shop is not very far away from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
The shop is not very far from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
This just tightens things up. “Very far away” is redundant
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that canould only be delivered only the next day.
When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that could only be delivered the next day.
I agreed and immediately forgot about it.
So by, at the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
So, at the end of the day I went to pick up the car.
I walked down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed upon earlier tohat day.
I walked down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed upon earlier that day.
They couldn't give me the car back because they already have disassembled some parts of it.
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Very relatable 😔 But also, very well written! Some of those corrections are basically what I would say to a native speaker.
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Last night it snowed for the first time this winter season. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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The shop is not very far away from my work, so I decided to take a walk.
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When I was at work, I received a call from the repair shop, asking if I could leave the car overnight because they needed a car part that can be delivered only the next day.
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So by the end of the day, I went to pick up the car.
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I walked down to the repair shop (it took me half an hour) just to be kindly reminded of what we had agreed earlier today.
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