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Feb. 14, 2023

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Writing Challenge Day, 136

Today is day 136 of my daily English challenge. Today I choose a difficult subject but it was very difficult because I do not much of vocabulary.

I want to write to my friend email to give him my advice and support him.I hope everyboy to understand me.

I don't to talk to you of the name religion but I want to talk to you of the name humanity.

They are two differents women.One woman guides one right path and the other guides him through Hell.

I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and you are a man of high morals... so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problem occurs, be patient. Remember that we are guests on earth.
Don't let a problem affect you. Try to talk to me until we find a solution.

And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, which I consider like my mother, I will take care of her.

Remember, I am here for you and to support you.

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Today is day 136 of my daily English challenge.

Don't let a problem affect you.

Try to talk to me until we find a solution.

Remember, I am here for you and to support you.

Today is day 136 of my daily English challenge.

Don't let a problem affect you.

Try to talk to me until we find a solution.

Remember, I am here for you and to support you.

Writing Challenge Day, 136


Writing Challenge Day, 136 Writing Challenge Day 136

Writing Challenge: Day, 136 Writing Challenge: Day 136

Today is day 136 of my daily English challenge.


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Today I choose a difficult subject but it was very difficult because I do not much of vocabulary.


Today I choose a difficult subject, but it was very difficult because I do not much ofhave a very big vocabulary. Today I chose a difficult subject, but it was very difficult because I do not have a very big vocabulary.

Today I choose a difficult subject, but it was very difficult because I do not have much of a vocabulary. Today I chose a difficult subject, but it was very difficult because I do not have much of a vocabulary.

You could also say "I do not have a very big vocabulary."

I want to write to my friend email to give him my advice and support him.I hope everyboy to understand me.


I want to write toemail my friend email to give him my advice and support him. I hope that everybody towill understand me. I want to email my friend to give him my advice and support him. I hope that everybody will understand me.

I want to write to my friend an email to give him my advice and support him. I hope everybody to understands me. I want to write my friend an email to give him my advice and support. I hope everybody understands me.

I don't to talk to you of the name religion but I want to talk to you of the name humanity.


I don't want to talk to you of the nameabout religion but I want to talk to you of the nameabout humanity. I don't want to talk to you about religion but I want to talk to you about humanity.

I don't to talk to you of the name religion but I want to talk to you of the name humanity. I don't to talk to you of the name religion but I want to talk to you of the name humanity.

I want to be sure I understand what you are trying to say before I correct this...you don't want to talk to him in the name of religion, but in the name of humanity? Something like that?

They are two differents women.One woman guides one right path and the other guides him through Hell.


They are two differents women.One woman guides on beings. One guides someone down the right path, and the other guides hithem through Hell. They are two different beings. One guides someone down the right path, and the other guides them through Hell.

I like the metaphor of religion and humanity guiding people down paths, though it may sound better to refer to them as “beings” rather than women.

Theyre are two differents kinds of women. One woman guides one down the right path, and the other guides him through Hell. There are two different kinds of women. One woman guides one down the right path, and the other guides him through Hell.

I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and you are a man of high morals... so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problem occurs, be patient.


I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... r Remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and I know you are a man of high morals..., so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problems occurs, be patient. I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty. Remember that whoever sows good will reap good. I know you are a man of high morals, so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if any problems occur, be patient.

In English, we often don’t use multiple ellipsis (“…”) in one sentence.

I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and you are a man of high morals... so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problem occurs, be patient. I am guiding you on the right path because it is my duty... remember that whoever sows good will reap good... and you are a man of high morals... so I allowed myself to tell you to be patient to your mother... and if you have any problems, be patient.

Remember that we are guests on earth.


Remember that we are guests on ethis Earth. Remember that we are guests on this Earth.

I know that it’s a bit strange to put “this “ before Earth because there’s only one Earth, but in sentences like yours, people often do refer to it as “this Earth”.

Remember that we are guests on this earth. Remember that we are guests on this earth.

Don't let a problem affect you.


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Try to talk to me until we find a solution.


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And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, which I consider like my mother, I will take care of her.


And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, whicho I consider like my own mother, I will take care of her. And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, who I consider like my own mother, I will take care of her.

“which” means you’re referring to the mother’s life “who” means you’re referring to the mother (as a person)

And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, which I consider like my mother, I will take care of I will take care of her like she is my own mother. And if we meet and God prolongs your mother's life, I will take care of her like she is my own mother.

Remember, I am here for you and to support you.


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