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I read someone's entry about the novel Grasshopper a few weeks ago.

I was curious about it, so I watched the live action version on Netflix.

It's a suspense action which has lots of assassins.

I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.

Honestly, it was complicated.

I found it difficult to catch up the story because there were many characters.

For example, I was like why this guy holds a grudge against that guy?

However, assassins were really cool.

There was a plot twist in the end, and it developed unexpectedly.


数週間前に、誰かが「グラスホッパー」という小説について書いた投稿を読みました。

気になったので、ネットフリックスで実写版を見てみました。

これは、たくさんの殺し屋が出てくるサスペンスアクションです。

私は、原作の小説を読んでないので、原作と実写版を比べることはできませんが、正直言ってこの話とても複雑でした。

登場人物がたくさんいて、話についていけませんでした。

例えば、この男はどうしてこの男に恨みを抱いているの?と思いました。

でも、殺し屋はみんなかっこよかったです。

話の最後に、どんでん返しがあり、予想外の展開でした。

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The Novel Grasshopper (58)

I read someone's entry about the novel Grasshopper a few weeks ago.

I was curious about it, so I watched the live action version on Netflix.

I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.

Honestly, it was complicated.

I found it difficult to catch up the story because there were many characters.

I was curious about it, so I watched the live action version on Netflix.

I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.

Honestly, it was complicated.

There was a plot twist in the end, and it developed unexpectedly.

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I read someone's entry about the novel Grasshopper a few weeks ago.

I was curious about it, so I watched the live action version on Netflix.

I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.

Honestly, it was complicated.

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The Novel Grasshopper

I read someone's entry about the novel Grasshopper a few weeks ago.

I was curious about it, so I watched the live action version on Netflix.

I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.

Honestly, it was complicated.

There was a plot twist in the end, and it developed unexpectedly.

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There was a plot twist in the end, and it developed unexpectedly.

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I was curious about it, so I watched the live action version on Netflix.

I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.

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I can't compare the original story to the live action because I've never read the novel.


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It's a suspense action which has lots of assassins.


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I found it difficult to catch up the story because there were many characters.


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