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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 14, 2022

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43 Inch Monitor

Unlikely other people, I use a 43 inch monitor in my office.

Last year, I tried to use a 32 inch monitor which was for my birthday present.

At first, it was so big for me, but it was very helpful when I worked at home.

My working system doesn't support dual monitors, so I couldn't see all work items using a 27 inch monitor.

This year, I had a chance to get a 43 inch monitor which was a test product.

The size of the monitor is almost double of a 27 inch one.

Moreover, the monitor supports UHD videos, so it is the best choice when I watch videos through Netflix, YouTube and so on.

I totally recommend when you work at home.

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43 Inch Monitor

Unlikely other people, I use a 43 inch monitor in my office.

Last year, I tried to use a 32 inch monitor which was for my birthday present.

At first, it was stoo big for me, but it was very helpful when I worked at home.

My workoperating system doesn't support dual monitors, so I couldn't see all work items usingof my windows on a 27 -inch monitor.

This year, I had athe chance to get a 43 -inch monitor, which was a test product.

The size of theis monitor is almost double the size of a 27 -inch one.

Moreover, ithe monitor supports UHD videos, so it is the best choice when Ifor watching videos throughon Netflix, YouTube and so on.

I totally recommend whenit if you work at home.

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good job!

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nebel11

Jan. 15, 2022

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ah sorry my previous corrections didn't show up - I can't seem to edit them either but here you go

43-inch monitor

Unlike other people, I use a 43-inch monitor in my office. Last year, I tried to use a 32-inch monitor, which was a birthday present.

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nebel11

Jan. 15, 2022

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43 Inch Monitor

43-inch monitor

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nebel11

Jan. 15, 2022

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Unlikely other people, I use a 43 inch monitor in my office.

Unlike other people, I use a 43-inch monitor in my office.

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nebel11

Jan. 15, 2022

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Last year, I tried to use a 32 inch monitor which was for my birthday present.

Last year, I tried to use a 32-inch monitor, which was a birthday present.

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 15, 2022

402

Ah, I understand. Thank you very much.

43 Inch Monitor

Unlikely other people, I use a 43 inch monitor in my office.

Last year, I tried to use a 32 inch monitor, which wasI got for my birthday present.

At first, it was stoo big for me, but it was very helpful when I worked atfrom home.

Just a stylistic correction :) The sentence is fine the way you wrote it.

My working system doesn't support dual monitors, soand I couldn't see all my work items using a 27 inch monitor.

This year, I had a chance to get a 43 inch monitor which was a test producttry out a test product, a 43 inch monitor.

"Try out" instead of "get" here, adds clarity to the idea that this is the first time you are using a 43 inch monitor.

The size of the monitor is almost double of a 27 inch one.

This sentence is fine! But if you wanted to, you could delete "The size of the monitor," and just use the pronoun "it," because you have already established that the topic of your paragraph is the monitor.

Moreover, the monitor supports UHD videos, so it is the best choice when I watch videos throughon Netflix, YouTube and so on, etc.

"Etc."/"and so on" have the same meaning, so just a stylistic choice! :)

I totally recommend using a larger monitor when you work atfrom home.

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Just a few stylistic and grammar corrections! Overall, great job! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 15, 2022

402

Thank you so much! Your advised sentences are fit for me.

43 Inch Monitor


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Unlikely other people, I use a 43 inch monitor in my office.


Unlikely other people, I use a 43 inch monitor in my office.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Last year, I tried to use a 32 inch monitor which was for my birthday present.


Last year, I tried to use a 32 inch monitor, which wasI got for my birthday present.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first, it was so big for me, but it was very helpful when I worked at home.


At first, it was stoo big for me, but it was very helpful when I worked atfrom home.

Just a stylistic correction :) The sentence is fine the way you wrote it.

At first, it was stoo big for me, but it was very helpful when I worked at home.

My working system doesn't support dual monitors, so I couldn't see all work items using a 27 inch monitor.


My working system doesn't support dual monitors, soand I couldn't see all my work items using a 27 inch monitor.

My workoperating system doesn't support dual monitors, so I couldn't see all work items usingof my windows on a 27 -inch monitor.

This year, I had a chance to get a 43 inch monitor which was a test product.


This year, I had a chance to get a 43 inch monitor which was a test producttry out a test product, a 43 inch monitor.

"Try out" instead of "get" here, adds clarity to the idea that this is the first time you are using a 43 inch monitor.

This year, I had athe chance to get a 43 -inch monitor, which was a test product.

The size of the monitor is almost double of a 27 inch one.


The size of the monitor is almost double of a 27 inch one.

This sentence is fine! But if you wanted to, you could delete "The size of the monitor," and just use the pronoun "it," because you have already established that the topic of your paragraph is the monitor.

The size of theis monitor is almost double the size of a 27 -inch one.

Moreover, the monitor supports UHD videos, so it is the best choice when I watch videos through Netflix, YouTube and so on.


Moreover, the monitor supports UHD videos, so it is the best choice when I watch videos throughon Netflix, YouTube and so on, etc.

"Etc."/"and so on" have the same meaning, so just a stylistic choice! :)

Moreover, ithe monitor supports UHD videos, so it is the best choice when Ifor watching videos throughon Netflix, YouTube and so on.

I totally recommend when you work at home.


I totally recommend using a larger monitor when you work atfrom home.

I totally recommend whenit if you work at home.

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