Oct. 26, 2021
October 26th, 2021
Princess Mako and Kei Komuro married today. However, many Japanese people opposed this marriage. It's because his mother has some troubles such as debt. When a member of royalty leaves the royal family, they can receive about 130 million yen. However, they didn't receive it. They don't even have a wedding ceremony. They will live in the US.
今日、眞子様と小室圭さんが結婚しました。でも多くの日本人はこの結婚に反対しています。彼の母親が借金などの問題を抱えているからです。皇室を離脱するときには、一時金として約1億3000万円を受け取ることができます。でも、彼らは受け取りませんでした。結婚式も行われません。二人はアメリカに住む予定です。
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Princess Mako and Kei Komuro got married today. Princess Mako and Kei Komuro got married today.
We usually use "got" in front of married.
Feb. 6, 2022
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October 26th, 2021
Princess Mako and Kei Komuro married today.
However, many Japanese people opposed this marriage.
It's because his mother has some troubles such as debt.
When a member of royalty leaves the royal family, they can receive about 130 million yen.
However, they didn't receive it.
They dwon't even have a wedding ceremony.
They won't even have a wedding ceremony.
"won't" sound more better and natural to me.
They will live in the US.
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"However, many Japanese people opposed this marriage AND It's because his mother has some troubles such as debt." you should try to connect sentences as well.
Oct. 26, 2021
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Princess Mako and Kei Komuro married today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Princess Mako and Kei Komuro got married today. Princess Mako and Kei Komuro got married today. We usually use "got" in front of married. |
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However, many Japanese people opposed this marriage. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's because his mother has some troubles such as debt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When a member of royalty leaves the royal family, they can receive about 130 million yen. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, they didn't receive it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They don't even have a wedding ceremony.
They "won't" sound more better and natural to me. |
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They will live in the US. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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