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What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.


More and more schools supply students with technology equipment, such as computers, gradually reducing books and handouts. There are some pros and cons of this issue are worth considering.

To begin with, one of the upsides of rasing several computes is that students can search for information quickly. Nowadays, we probably find anything on the internet, and some websites conclude all the details, thus we cut a lot of time doing research and discovering resources. In addition, computers are beneficial tools up-to-date. Teenagers are cable to learn numerous things and diverse knowledge from technology. Because of convenience, youths will gain more experiences, interests and increase their passion for learning new things. Taking advantage of technology, they will be a better person in the future.

What's more, computers are useful for students; however, there are some disadvantages as well. For example, most of the student easily distract by internet equipment for playing virtual games, watching videos, and so on. Using computers in the wrong way, youngsters' study efficiency will decrease and maybe cause them to addict to the internet. Moreover, using computers for a long period is harm to an eye condition, like currently, the number of younger people, wearing glasses is increasing. Besides, replacing books and exams completely by computers may not be a good choice. In my opinion, it tempts students to cheat and relies on searching for answers not thinking.

In conclusion, schools install more tablets and laptop computers for students, lessening books and other paper resources have the advantage and disadvantages. Personally, I, for one, disagree that schools' decision of replacing books with computers.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Taking advantage of technology, they will be a better person in the future.

What's more, computers are useful for students; however, there are some disadvantages as well.

Besides, replacing books and exams completely by computers may not be a good choice.

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Nov. 20, 2019

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?


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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.


An increasing number of schools are provideing tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. An increasing number of schools are providing tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.

More and more schools supply students with technology equipment, such as computers, gradually reducing books and handouts.


(More and more schools supply students with technology equipment, such as computers, gradually reducing books and handouts.) (More and more schools supply students with technology equipment, such as computers, gradually reducing books and handouts.)

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There are some pros and cons of this issue are worth considering.


There are sSome pros and cons of this issue are worthtrend should be consideringed. Some pros and cons of this trend should be considered.


To begin with, one of the upsides of rasing several computes is that students can search for information quickly.


To begin with, one of the upsides of rasing severaldistributing computers is that students can search for information quickly. To begin with, one of the upsides of distributing computers is that students can search for information quickly.

Nowadays, we probably find anything on the internet, and some websites conclude all the details, thus we cut a lot of time doing research and discovering resources.


Nowadays, we can probably find anything on the internet, and some websites coinclude all the details, thus we cutsaving a lot of time doing research and discovering resources. Nowadays, we can probably find anything on the internet, and some websites include all the details, saving a lot of time doing research and discovering resources.

In addition, computers are beneficial tools up-to-date.


( In addition, computers are beneficial tools up-to-date.) ( In addition, computers are beneficial tools up-to-date.)

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Teenagers are cable to learn numerous things and diverse knowledge from technology.


Teenagers are cable to learn numerous things and diverse knowledge from technology. Teenagers are able to learn numerous and diverse knowledge from technology.

Because of convenience, youths will gain more experiences, interests and increase their passion for learning new things.


Because of the convenience, youths will gain more experiences, interests and increase their passion forand interest to learning new things. Because of the convenience, youths will gain more experience and increase their passion and interest to learn new things.

Taking advantage of technology, they will be a better person in the future.


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What's more, computers are useful for students; however, there are some disadvantages as well.


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For example, most of the student easily distract by internet equipment for playing virtual games, watching videos, and so on.


For example, most of the students are easily distracted by internet equipment for playing virtual games, watchingvideo games, videos, and so on. For example, most of the students are easily distracted by video games, videos, and so on.

Using computers in the wrong way, youngsters' study efficiency will decrease and maybe cause them to addict to the internet.


UBy using computers in the wrong way, youngsters' study efficiency will decrease and maybe even cause them to get addicted to the internet. By using computers in the wrong way, youngsters' study efficiency will decrease and maybe even cause them to get addicted to the internet.

Moreover, using computers for a long period is harm to an eye condition, like currently, the number of younger people, wearing glasses is increasing.


Moreover, using computers for a long period is harmful to anthe eye condition, like cs.Currently, the number of younger people, who wearings glasses is increasing. Moreover, using computers for a long period is harmful to the eyes.Currently, the number of younger people who wears glasses is increasing.

Besides, replacing books and exams completely by computers may not be a good choice.


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In my opinion, it tempts students to cheat and relies on searching for answers not thinking.


In my opinion, it tempts students to cheat and reliesy on searching for answers notinstead of thinking. In my opinion, it tempts students to cheat and rely on searching for answers instead of thinking.


In conclusion, schools install more tablets and laptop computers for students, lessening books and other paper resources have the advantage and disadvantages.


In conclusion, schools installing more tablets and laptop computers for students, lessening books and other paper resources have bothe advantages and disadvantages. In conclusion, schools installing more tablets and laptop computers for students, lessening books and other paper resources have both advantages and disadvantages.

Personally, I, for one, disagree that schools' decision of replacing books with computers.


Personally, I, for one, disagree that schools' decision of replacing books with computers. Personally, I disagree that schools' decision of replacing books with computers.

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