April 15, 2020
4/15 diary (English)
Today,it is Wednesday. Today is election day. I have to vote for legislator. But i really don't know who is better. However, voting for someone is my right as a citizen. People who didn't vote for someone have no right to blame bad lawmakers. Because they abandon their rights. And today i got a word! It is 'In no small part due to'=a big part of it is due to that. He said " I've been eating ice cream bit more often lately, in no part due to how close ㅇㅇㅅㅋㄹ is of course". I translated it as '나는 요즘 더 자주 아이스크림을 먹는데 ㅇㅇㅅㅋㄹ가 언제 문을 닫는지도 한 몫 했다'. Because the store have closed late I guess. sometimes translating English to Korean is difficult!!
Today,it is Wednesday.
Today is Wednesday and it's the election day.
It's best to connect sentences together since it sounds more sophisticated.
I have to vote for the legislator.
B,but iI really don't know who is better.
"But" is not usually used for the beginning of a sentence, but it's okay when it's informal/casual.
People who didon't vote for someone have no right to blame bad lawmakers.
did <-- past tense
Bbecause they abandon their rights.
"Because" is usually connected with another clause/sentence.
Andlso, today i got a wordI learned a new phrase!
word -> 1
phrase -> a chunk, a few words
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April 16, 2020
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Today, it is Wednesday.
I have to vote for a new legislator.
But i really don't know who is betterthe best option.
However, voting for someone is my rightduty as a citizen.
People who didon't vote for someone have no right to blame bad lawmakers.
Because they abandoned their rightduties, they can't place blame on others.
"Because" at the beginning of a sentence makes an incomplete sentence if you don't give the result of the cause after a comma.
And today i got a wordToday I learned a new phrase!
Because this is a separate topic, you should add an indent and start this sentence on a new line.
It is 'I"in no small part due to'=," which means "a big part of it is due to that" some reason.
HSomeone said " I've been eating ice cream bit more often lately, in no small part due to how close ㅇㅇㅅㅋㄹ(a famous ice cream shop?) is, of course".
Because theat store have closeds late, he can go often, I guess.
sSometimes translating English to Korean is difficult!!
I bet! Good job though.
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4/15 diary (English) |
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Today,it is Wednesday. Today, it is Wednesday. Today |
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Today is election day. Today is Wednesday and it's the election day. It's best to connect sentences together since it sounds more sophisticated. |
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I have to vote for legislator. I have to vote for a new legislator. I have to vote for the legislator. |
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But i really don't know who is better. But i really don't know who is
"But" is not usually used for the beginning of a sentence, but it's okay when it's informal/casual. |
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However, voting for someone is my right as a citizen. However, voting for someone is my |
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People who didn't vote for someone have no right to blame bad lawmakers. People who d People who d did <-- past tense |
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Because they abandon their rights. Because they abandoned their "Because" at the beginning of a sentence makes an incomplete sentence if you don't give the result of the cause after a comma.
"Because" is usually connected with another clause/sentence. |
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And today i got a word!
Because this is a separate topic, you should add an indent and start this sentence on a new line. A word -> 1 phrase -> a chunk, a few words |
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It is 'In no small part due to'=a big part of it is due to that. It is |
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He said " I've been eating ice cream bit more often lately, in no part due to how close ㅇㅇㅅㅋㄹ is of course".
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I translated it as '나는 요즘 더 자주 아이스크림을 먹는데 ㅇㅇㅅㅋㄹ가 언제 문을 닫는지도 한 몫 했다'. |
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Because the store have closed late I guess. Because th |
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sometimes translating English to Korean is difficult!!
I bet! Good job though. |
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