Nov. 26, 2021
40% Exercise / 60% Eat
Last 3 months I exercise a lot.
As result I manage to reduce some weight.
I am happy.
But l do feel tire and is hard for to push furthermore exercise.
The other option I can try is reduce how much I eat per day.
Actually I do try that method couple years ago.
The result was good I loss so much weight.
But I was overly do that and getting really sick.
I hope this time will get the right balance.
40% Exercise / 60% Eat
During/For the Last 3 months I have exercised a lot.
You can say either "during" or "for"
As result I have managed to reduclose some weight.
Or you can say "I managed"
We say lose for weight loss in a person. You might say reduced weight in an object
I am happy.
But l do feel tired and is hard for to push furthermyself to do more exercise.
Or:
hard for to me to do more exercise.
The other option I can try is to reduce how much I eat per day.
Actually I doid try that method a couple of years ago.
Good use of "couple" rather than "two". It will always be "a couple of" rather than just "couple"
The result was good I losst so much weight.
But I was overly do thaoverdid it and gettingot really sick.
I hope this time I will get the right balance.
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Great writing.
Focus on using the past tense when talking about events that happened in the past
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40% Exercise / 60% Eat This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last 3 months I exercise a lot. During/For the Last 3 months I have exercised a lot. You can say either "during" or "for" |
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As result I manage to reduce some weight. As result I have managed to Or you can say "I managed" We say lose for weight loss in a person. You might say reduced weight in an object |
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I am happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But l do feel tire and is hard for to push furthermore exercise. But l do feel tired and is hard for to push Or: hard for to me to do more exercise. |
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The other option I can try is reduce how much I eat per day. The other option I can try is to reduce how much I eat per day. |
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Actually I do try that method couple years ago. Actually I d Good use of "couple" rather than "two". It will always be "a couple of" rather than just "couple" |
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The result was good I loss so much weight. The result was good I los |
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But I was overly do that and getting really sick. But I |
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I hope this time will get the right balance. I hope this time I will get the right balance. |
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