Experience of my computer breaking down Experience of my computer breaking down

Today, I’m going to talk about my experience thatwhen my computer broke down. Today, I’m going to talk about when my computer broke down.

You can also say "Today, I’m going to talk about my experience with my computer breaking down."

It was really frustrateding. It was really frustrating.

It was frustrating; it causes frustration. You were frustrated; you experienced frustration.

At that time, I was working in an import and export company and I needed to translate their products’ information, which was a daunting task because I needed to find appropriate  colloc translations and phrasal verbs. At that time, I was working in an import and export company and I needed to translate their products’ information, which was a daunting task because I needed to find appropriate translations and phrasal verbs.

While I was translating, my computer just went to blank and everything was just gone. While I was translating, my computer just went blank and everything was just gone.

I was about to go crazy and. I didn’t know what happened and, or what I was gonnaing to do. I was about to go crazy. I didn’t know what happened, or what I was going to do.

If I can’ouldn't fix it, it meant that I need to start from scratch. If I couldn't fix it, it meant that I need to start from scratch.

I was furious and I felt computers were not reliable, because you havdid not want to rely on computers, because it was impossible nto ideatell when they would break down. I was furious and I did not want to rely on computers, because it was impossible to tell when they would break down.

There is a mix of past and present tense here. Sticking to single tense can help make the text understandable.

However, I can not deny that computers do bring us so many conveniences. However, I can not deny that computers do bring us so many conveniences.

You can also say that computers "make life so much easier."

For example, it is time-savingsaves a lot of time when you need to record a meeting, because you do not have to write down everything. For example, it saves a lot of time when you record a meeting, because you do not have to write down everything.