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-I need to create a story with some words : Scholar, goodness, above, wealthy, startling, wand, fickle, forshadow, feud, meaningful, sneak, warp, vessel-

Long time ago, when goodness was an unknow word, a startling scholar appeared on a impressive vessel.
It was one of the most meaningful events of the century.
He had a long beard, wealthy clothes and he held a long stick which look like a wand.
This strange man forshawed a new age.
But the kings around the world warped the presage.
A feud erupted and a war sneaked throught the kingdoms.

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It was one of the most meaningful events of the century.

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-I need to create a story with some words : Scholar, goodness, above, wealthy, startling, wand, fickle, forshadow, feud, meaningful, sneak, warp, vessel-


-I need to create a story with somethe following words : Sscholar, goodness, above, wealthy, startling, wand, fickle, foreshadow, feud, meaningful, sneak, warp, and vessel-. I need to create a story with the following words: scholar, goodness, above, wealthy, startling, wand, fickle, foreshadow, feud, meaningful, sneak, warp, and vessel.

In English, we attach the colon to the word instead of using a space. All of the words that you are trying to use should follow the same format since they're in a sequence, so I took the capital letter off of "scholar". You should end any sequence in English with a coordinating conjugation (e.g., "and", "but", "or", etc.). Here, I used "and".

Long time ago, when goodness was an unknow word, a startling scholar appeared on a impressive vessel.


LA long time ago, when goodness was an unknown word, a startling scholar appeared on a impressive vessel. A long time ago, when goodness was an unknown word, a startling scholar appeared on a impressive vessel.

LA long time ago, when goodness was an unknown word, a startling scholar appeared on an impressive vessel. A long time ago, when goodness was an unknown word, a startling scholar appeared on an impressive vessel.

In English, we say "A long time ago..." Since "impressive" starts with an "i", you need to use "an" instead of "a".

It was one of the most meaningful events of the century.


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He had a long beard, wealthy clothes and he held a long stick which look like a wand.


He had a long beard, wealthyexpensive clothes, and he held a long stick whichthat looked like a wand. He had a long beard, expensive clothes, and he held a long stick that looked like a wand.

"Wealthy" is a word to describe a person who has a lot of money. I think a better word here is "expensive", which means it costs a lot of money. Make sure to keep your tenses consistent: "He held a long stick that lookED like a wand"

This strange man forshawed a new age.


This strange man foreshadowed a new age. This strange man foreshadowed a new age.

"Foreshadow" (not "forshadow") means "to be a sign of". This would mean that the strange man was a sign of a new age coming.

This strange man foreshadowed a new age. This strange man foreshadowed a new age.

Corrected for spelling.

But the kings around the world warped the presage.


But the kings around the world warped the presage. But the kings around the world warped the presage.

This sentence is correct, but I've never once used the English word "presage"...in fact, I had to look it up! It's not a common word that I know of.

A feud erupted and a war sneaked throught the kingdoms.


A feud erupted and a war sneaked throughout the kingdoms. A feud erupted and a war sneaked throughout the kingdoms.

A feud erupted and a war sneakedbroke out throught the kingdoms. A feud erupted and a war broke out through the kingdoms.

We would say that a war "broke out". "Through" was corrected for spelling.

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