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Write about your future travel plansMy futures travel plans
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In my holidays, my next destiny is Chile, it's is a country next to Argentina, it's a large territory with a lots of nature and thinks to do. I travel to Chile with mi girldfriend in February, for the long weekend. We want to change our phones and buy cheap clothes. We also want to know new places and have different experiences. I don't like the Chilean accent, it's very difficult to understand. In our holidays we always travel to SouthAmerica, specifically to San Martin of the Andes, in Argentina, we loves it. I would like to live here, maybe in a few years. We currently live in mendoza, wich is why we chose Chile as our next vacation destination, Chile and Mendoza are close.
En mis vacaciones, mi siguiente destino es Chile, es un pais al lado de Argentina, es un largo territorio con mucha naturaleza y cosas por hacer. Viajo a Chile con mi novia en febrero, en el fin de semana largo. Queremos cambiar nuestros telefonos y comprar ropa barata. Tambien queremos conocer nuevos lugares y experiencias diferentes. No me gusta el acento chileno, es dificil de entender. En nuestras vacaciones siempre viamos a Sudameric, precisamente a San Martin de los Andes, en Argentina, nos encanta. Me gustaria vivir ahi, quiza en unos años. Actualmente vivimos en Mendoza, es por esto que elegimos Chile como proximo destino de vacaciones, Chile y Mendoza estan cerca.
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InFor my holidays, my next destinydestination is Chile., it's is It's a country next to Argentina, and it's a large territory with a lots of nature and thinksthings to do.
I am going to travel to Chile with mi girldfriendmy girlfriend in February, for the long weekend.
"The" long weekend, as in there is a public holiday in Chile at that time? Or "a" long weekend, as in you are taking a day off work to make it a long weekend for yourself only?
We also want to knowvisit new places and have different experiences.
I don't like the Chilean accent, because it's very difficult to understand.
In our holidays we always travel to SouthAmericaSouth America, specifically to San Martin of the Andes., in In Argentina, we loveslove it.
I would like to live herethere, maybe in a few years.
We currently live in mendozaMendoza, wichwhich is why we chose Chile as our next vacation destination, as Chile and Mendoza are close.
Overall feedback
Look out for run-on sentences and spelling mistakes. Otherwise excellent work!
Tkank you for your comments, it's very valuable for my. Regarding the long weekend, in Argentina, we have a long weekend on February for "Carnivals", but I can see that it's not the same in Chile.
In my holidays, my next destinydestination is Chile, it'sit is a country next to Argentina, it's a large territorycountry with a lots of nature and thinksthings to do.
Use destination when you are going places. eg, my next destination of this journey is Turkey ‘country’ sounds more natural than ‘territory’ small spelling mistake things instead of thinks
I will travel to Chile with mi girldfriendmy girlfriend in February, for the long weekend.
Adding in ‘will’ makes it sound more natural My instead of mi girlfriend instead of girldfriend but i think thats just a small mistake
We also want to knowexplore new places and have different experiences.
‘explore’ sounds more natural
Overall feedback
well done! small minority mistakes,, have fun in chile!!
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