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There are many wordspieces of advice in life I can't forget, no matter how much time passes. There are many pieces of advice in life I can't forget, no matter how much time passes.

"words" works grammatically, but it sounds funny in English. It would be better to be more specific.

One of which is my older sister's warning to me when I was in middle school -, "Stay away from soldiers, and do not antagonize them" One of which is my older sister's warning to me when I was in middle school, "Stay away from soldiers, and do not antagonize them"

Minor punctuation issues.

OnSome of which iswere my older sister's warning to me when I was in middle school - "Stay away from soldiers and do not antagonize them." Some of which were my older sister's warning to me when I was in middle school - "Stay away from soldiers and do not antagonize them."

My elementary and middle school awere situated in an area adjacent to a military university, an army detachment, a big fire station (belonging to the army), and even a naval office. My elementary and middle school were situated adjacent to a military university, an army detachment, a big fire station (belonging to the army), and even a naval office.

Another minor issue, but since the rest of the story is in past tense this sounds more natural. Also "in an area" here is unnecessarily wordy, but not incorrect.

MBoth my elementary and middle school are situated in an area adjacent to a military university, an army detachment, a big fire station (belonging to the army), and even a naval office. Both my elementary and middle school are situated in an area adjacent to a military university, an army detachment, a big fire station (belonging to the army), and even a naval office.

My elementary and middle schools are situated in an area adjacent to a military university, an army detachment, a big fire station (belonging to the army), and even a naval office. My elementary and middle schools are situated in an area adjacent to a military university, an army detachment, a big fire station (belonging to the army), and even a naval office.

I studied with many classmates from the military units, and many teachers were military officials' wives, the local schools have no right s to reject themwere required to hire them if they applied. I studied with many classmates from the military units, and many teachers were military officials' wives, the local schools were required to hire them if they applied.

I studied with many classmates from the military units, and many teachers were military officials' wives, t. The local schools have no right s to reject them. I studied with many classmates from the military units, and many teachers were military officials' wives. The local schools have no right to reject them.

I studied with manMany of my classmates were from the military units, and many teachers were wives of military officials' wives, t. The local schools haved no right s to rejectchoice but to hire them. Many of my classmates were from the military units, and many teachers were wives of military officials. The local schools had no choice but to hire them.

Most of such students and ladies were well -educated, and some of such teachers were enthusiastic about their job. Most of such students and ladies were well-educated, and some teachers were enthusiastic about their job.

Most ofany such students and ladies were well educated, and some of suchthe teachers were enthusiastic about their jobs. Many such students and ladies were well educated, and some of the teachers were enthusiastic about their jobs.

However, that' was not the case for common soldiers. However, that was not the case for common soldiers.

However, that'That was not the case for common soldiers, however. That was not the case for common soldiers, however.

I knew some of the local illegal crime groups liked to buy help from the soldiers, though they were only a small portion ofonly a few soldiers worked with them, local residents and policemen had no way to deal with it. I knew some of the local crime groups liked to buy help from the soldiers, though only a few soldiers worked with them, local residents and policemen had no way to deal with it.

"they were only a small portion of them" I'm not clear what you mean by this. Only a few soldiers participated with the crime groups? There were only a few crime groups? This also sounds off in English.

I knew some of the local illegal crime groups liked to buy help from the soldiers, though they were only a small portion of themhire soldiers for help and, though they were few in number, local residents and policemen had no way to deal with ithem. I knew some of the local crime groups liked to hire soldiers for help and, though they were few in number, local residents and policemen had no way to deal with them.

My classmate was beaten tso be disabled was beyond the soldiers' expectationsadly he was disabled, but I believe it was not their first time. My classmate was beaten so badly he was disabled, but I believe it was not their first time.

"was beyond the soldiers' expectations" I'm not clear what you mean by this.

My classmate wasbeing beaten to beuntil he was disabled was beyond the soldiers' expectations, but I believe it was not their first time. My classmate being beaten until he was disabled was beyond the soldiers' expectations, but I believe it was not their first time.

As I wrote in the last entry, I thought their final punishment was strict. As I wrote in the last entry, I thought their final punishment was strict.

Whose punishment?

In fact, when I see my classmate walk like a hunchback and inot capable tof working normally, I feel the pain in him. In fact, when I see my classmate walk like a hunchback and incapable of working normally, I feel the pain in him.

In fact, when I see my classmate walk like a hunchback and not capable tof working normally, I feel the pain in him. In fact, when I see my classmate walk like a hunchback and not capable of working normally, I feel the pain in him.

The punishment was not enough, s. Some of them should behave been jailed, and the army should pay money monthly to guarantee a normal life for my classmate. The punishment was not enough. Some of them should have been jailed, and the army should pay money monthly to guarantee a normal life for my classmate.

I'm a little confused here because earlier you say the punishment was strict.

The punishment was not enough, s. Some of them should behave been jailed and the army should payhave paid my classmate money on a monthly basis to guarantee a normal life for my classmatehim. The punishment was not enough. Some of them should have been jailed and the army should have paid my classmate money on a monthly basis to guarantee a normal life for him.

あるいは、 The punishment was not enough. Some of them should have been jailed and the army should have paid my classmate restitution on a monthly basis to guarantee a normal life for him.

They only show their positive aspects. They only show their positive aspects.

また、 They only write about their positive aspects.

As nationalism has increased in recenover the past 10 years, this biased reporting is stretched to policemen and state-owned corporations. As nationalism has increased over the past 10 years, this biased reporting is stretched to policemen and state-owned corporations.

I'm not sure what you mean in the second part of the sentence. Are you saying that the media is more biased now that before? Maybe change to: "As nationalism has increased over the past 10 years, positive media coverage is the only media coverage for the police and state-owned corporations."

As nationalism has increased in recenthe past 10 years, this biased reporting is stretchextended to policemen and state-owned corporations. As nationalism has increased in the past 10 years, this biased reporting is extended to policemen and state-owned corporations.

To be more clear; all news for the above field is positive, bad news only for private companies. To be more clear, bad news only for private companies.

Edited to flow better with the previous sentence.

To be more clear;: all news for the above field iss are positive, while bad news is reserved only for private companies. To be more clear: all news for the above fields are positive while bad news is reserved only for private companies.

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