Oct. 8, 2020
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I love the blue sky with white clouds and it is really fantastic. You can see this fabulous scenery only in autumn. At this moment, I think of a Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄” although I am not a poet and I cannot write poems, I like reading poems. When I see a nice poem, I appreciate it so much. I don’t know if I am happy, maybe kind of. A little thing in life sometimes always makes me very grateful. Yes, for me life is always cool. Over all, I think I am a happy person even though I can also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out soon. Haha, it’s not bad.
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I love the blue sky with white clouds and, because it is really fantastic.
I love the blue sky with white clouds, because it is really fantastic.
You have two complete sentences, so they should be separated with either a comma or a period.
You can see this fabulous scenery only in autumn.
At this moment, I think'm reminded of athe Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄” a. Although I am not a poet and I cannot write poemstry, I like reading poems.
At this moment, I'm reminded of the Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄”. Although I am not a poet and cannot write poetry, I like reading poems.
When I see a nice poem, I appreciate it so much.
I don’t know if I am happy, maybe kind of.
AOftentimes, it is the little things in life sometimes alwaysthat makes me very grateful.
Oftentimes, it is the little things in life that make me grateful.
Yes, for me life is always cool.
Over all, I think I am a happy person, even though I can also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out sooneasily.
Overall, I think I am a happy person, even though I also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out easily.
Haha, it’s not bad.
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The simple things in life are often the sweetest^^ I also enjoy living a simple life.
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I love the blue sky with white clouds and it is really fantastic.
I love the blue sky with white clouds You have two complete sentences, so they should be separated with either a comma or a period. |
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You can see this fabulous scenery only in autumn. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At this moment, I think of a Chinese poem “晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄” although I am not a poet and I cannot write poems, I like reading poems.
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When I see a nice poem, I appreciate it so much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don’t know if I am happy, maybe kind of. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A little thing in life sometimes always makes me very grateful.
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Yes, for me life is always cool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Over all, I think I am a happy person even though I can also feel bored at times, but I can pull myself out soon.
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Haha, it’s not bad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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