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kyoko

Nov. 19, 2019

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A lovely day

This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;)
Also it’s lovely weather today.
I found a cute cat on my way home.
Those small things made me happy :)

I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart.

I hope you all have a lovely day☺️


今朝、息子は毎日通う保育所に喜んで行きました。
天気もよくて、帰り道には可愛い猫を見つけました🐈
そんな小さなことで嬉しくなりました。

私は、小さな幸せを集めてはそっと心の中の宝箱にしまっています。

みなさんもいい日になりますように☺️

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kyoko

Nov. 19, 2019

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A lovely day

I found a cute cat on my way home.

I hope you all have a lovely day☺️

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kyoko

Dec. 8, 2019

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A lovely day


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This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;)


This morning my son was excited to go to athe daycare center which he goes to everyday ;) This morning my son was excited to go to the daycare center which he goes to everyday ;)

Use "the" when writing about something specific.

This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center whichre, that he goes to everyday ;) This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare centre, that he goes to everyday ;)

Also it’s lovely weather today.


Also it’s lovely weatherthe weather is lovely today. Also the weather is lovely today.

A more natural way to talk about the weather (the weather becomes the subject).

Also it’s lovely weatherthe weather is lovely today. Also the weather is lovely today.

I found a cute cat on my way home.


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Those small things made me happy :)


Thoese small things made me happy :) These small things made me happy :)

I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart.


I am collecting such every such small happiness and putting them softly in a treasure box in my heart. I am collecting every such small happiness and putting them softly in a treasure box in my heart.

Because you start the sentence with "I am collecting", the tense of "put" must match: "and (I am) putting"

I am collecting such every small happiness and putting them sofgently into a treasure box inside my heart. I am collecting every small happiness and putting them gently into a treasure box inside my heart.

May you all have a lovely day☺️


I hope you all have a lovely day☺️


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