Nov. 19, 2019
This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;)
Also it’s lovely weather today.
I found a cute cat on my way home.
Those small things made me happy :)
I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
I hope you all have a lovely day☺️
今朝、息子は毎日通う保育所に喜んで行きました。
天気もよくて、帰り道には可愛い猫を見つけました🐈
そんな小さなことで嬉しくなりました。
私は、小さな幸せを集めてはそっと心の中の宝箱にしまっています。
みなさんもいい日になりますように☺️
This morning my son was excited to go to athe daycare center which he goes to everyday ;)
This morning my son was excited to go to the daycare center which he goes to everyday ;)
Use "the" when writing about something specific.
Also it’s lovely weatherthe weather is lovely today.
Also the weather is lovely today.
A more natural way to talk about the weather (the weather becomes the subject).
I am collecting such every such small happiness and putting them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
I am collecting every such small happiness and putting them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
Because you start the sentence with "I am collecting", the tense of "put" must match: "and (I am) putting"
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I'm glad your day was so nice! :)
A lovely day
This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center whichre, that he goes to everyday ;)
This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare centre, that he goes to everyday ;)
Also it’s lovely weatherthe weather is lovely today.
Also the weather is lovely today.
I found a cute cat on my way home.
Thoese small things made me happy :)
These small things made me happy :)
I am collecting such every small happiness and putting them sofgently into a treasure box inside my heart.
I am collecting every small happiness and putting them gently into a treasure box inside my heart.
I hope you all have a lovely day☺️
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This morning my son was excited to go to a daycare center which he goes everyday ;)
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Also it’s lovely weather today.
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Those small things made me happy :)
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I am collecting such every small happiness and put them softly in a treasure box in my heart.
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