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The longest bull run ended and the global economy was in decline. The world art market had already been losing momentum for a while. As spening of any sort became deeply unfashion, more collectors stayed away from galleries and salerooms, which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit. However, someone have the confidence to return, believing that this art market slump lies in the lack of good artworks to sell.

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As spending of any sort became deeply unfashionable, more collectors stayed away from galleries and salerooms, which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit.

which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit.

I do not know what you mean in this segment.
Who is avoiding the "huge deposit?"
Auction houses are businesses, but the first have of the sentence seems to imply the ultra wealthy as the Subject.

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The longest bull run ended and the global economy was in decline.


TEven before the longest bull run ended and the global economy was in decline., Even before the longest bull run ended and the global economy was in decline,

The world art market had already been losing momentum for a while.


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As spening of any sort became deeply unfashion, more collectors stayed away from galleries and salerooms, which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit.


As spending of any sort became deeply unfashionable, more collectors stayed away from galleries and salerooms, which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit. As spending of any sort became deeply unfashionable, more collectors stayed away from galleries and salerooms, which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit.

which brings aution houses had to pay out a huge deposit. I do not know what you mean in this segment. Who is avoiding the "huge deposit?" Auction houses are businesses, but the first have of the sentence seems to imply the ultra wealthy as the Subject.

However, someone have the confidence to return, believing that this art market slump lies in the lack of good artworks to sell.


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