May 8, 2021
The place I dream of
Before I take this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live.
The world always tell, you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house have a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed.
Eventually I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself.
My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passby, I believe that is the place I dream to live.
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The place I dream of. The place I dream of.
Before I takeook this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live.
Before I took this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live.
The world always tell,s you that you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house have(with/that has) a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed.
The world always tells you that you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house (with/that has) a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed.
Eventually, I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself. Eventually, I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself.
My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passes by, I believe that is the place I dream to live. My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passes by, I believe that is the place I dream to live.
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Before I take this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live.
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The world always tell, you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house have a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed.
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Eventually I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself. Eventually, I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself. Eventually, I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself. |
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My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passby, I believe that is the place I dream to live. My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passes by, I believe that is the place I dream to live. My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passes by, I believe that is the place I dream to live. |
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