Dec. 15, 2020
2020.12.15 Tuesday
Do the advantages of computer games outweigh the disadvantages? Why?
As for me,I think that the disadvantage of computer games outweigh the advantage.
It' sure playing computer games can elevate people's reaction ability. But for those people who just lack of self-control,they may become so addictd to games that they forget their assignments and even abandon their goals which was set last week!
In addition,I found some people talked billingsgate when they played the computer game because they will lose their game soon. It seems that the games will impacted people's mood,which let you become more impulsive and irritable as well.
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Tuesday 2020.12.15 Tuesday
Tuesday 2020.12.15
Usually in English, we say the day of the week first. For example, "Today is Tuesday, December 15th."
As for me,In my opinion, I think that the disadvantages of computer games outweigh the advantages.
In my opinion, I think that the disadvantages of computer games outweigh the advantages.
It' surSure/It's true playing computer games can elevate people's reaction ability.
Sure/It's true playing computer games can elevate people's reaction ability.
ButHowever, for those people who just lack of self-control, they may become so addicted to playing games that they forget their assignments and even abandon their goals which wasere set last week!
However, for those people who just lack of self-control, they may become so addicted to playing games that they forget their assignments and even abandon their goals which were set last week!
In addition,I found some people talked to this, I have heard that some people have been talking about billingsgate when they played the computer games because they will lose their game soon.
In addition to this, I have heard that some people have been talking about billingsgate when they play computer games because they will lose their game soon.
I'm not sure what you mean by "billingsgate?" Is that a person? Do you mean "bills?" The only thing that comes to my mind when I read that is "Bill Gates."
It seems that the games willplaying games also have an impacted on people's mood,which let you. You may become more impulsive and irritable as well.
It seems that playing games also have an impact on people's mood. You may become more impulsive and irritable as well.
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Nice entry. I also think that despite the benefits of playing video or mobile games, it can hurt you more than help you, like you said. Although I came across an interesting article where it said that elderly people who play video games have been able to retain a better attention span and have a faster reaction time compared to their peers who don't. It was also a way for them to battle loneliness too.
Dec. 15, 2020
谢谢你帮我改正它！I searched "说脏话" how to speak in English in my phone,it tells me that it is "talk billingsgate" .How do you say "说脏话" in english？
Dec. 15, 2020
Oh I see that's what you meant. To say, “说脏话” you can say, "they're cussing/swearing" (very colloquial) or "they're screaming profanities."
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2020.12.15 Tuesday
Tuesday 2020.12.15 Usually in English, we say the day of the week first. For example, "Today is Tuesday, December 15th." |
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Do the advantages of computer games outweigh the disadvantages? |
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Why? |
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As for me,I think that the disadvantage of computer games outweigh the advantage.
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It' sure playing computer games can elevate people's reaction ability.
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But for those people who just lack of self-control,they may become so addictd to games that they forget their assignments and even abandon their goals which was set last week!
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In addition,I found some people talked billingsgate when they played the computer game because they will lose their game soon.
In addition I'm not sure what you mean by "billingsgate?" Is that a person? Do you mean "bills?" The only thing that comes to my mind when I read that is "Bill Gates." |
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It seems that the games will impacted people's mood,which let you become more impulsive and irritable as well.
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