repezendelivery344's avatar
repezendelivery344

June 13, 2021

0
I am frustrated

I am so frustrated now. Because I am doing an independent business, and I had a big item to make money yesterday. But, I couldn't get a lot of money I expected. On top of that, my acquaintance made a lot of money by the same item. I heard that I have to make an effort harder, but I want a change of pace. I want somebody to let me know how should I do.

diaryenglish
Corrections (1)
Correction Settings
Choose how corrections are organized

Only show inserted text
Word-level diffs are planned for a future update.

I am frustrated

I am frustrated


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so frustrated now.


I am so frustrated right now. I am so frustrated right now.

Your sentence is fine, but changing it to "right now" makes it feel more natural.

Because I am doing an independent business, and I had a big item to make money yesterday.


Because I am doingI have an independent business, and I had a bigto sell an important item to make money yesterday. I have an independent business, and I had to sell an important item to make money yesterday.

It's better not to start sentences with "because". You can get rid of it here. Your sentence isn't that clear either, so "I had a big item to make money" is confusing. Do you mean you need to sell this item to make money? I corrected it, but I'm not sure if it's right.

But, I couldn't get a lot of money I expected.


But, I coulHowever, I didn't get a lot ofs much money as I expected. However, I didn't get as much money as I expected.

On top of that, my acquaintance made a lot of money by the same item.


On top of that, my acquaintance made a lot of money by selling the same item. On top of that, my acquaintance made a lot of money by selling the same item.

I heard that I have to make an effort harder, but I want a change of pace.


I heard thatthink I have to make an effort harder effort, but I want a change of pace. I think I have to make a harder effort, but I want a change of pace.

What do you mean by "I heard" - who told you this, where did you hear this? Maybe you should write "I think"? Also, the phrase is "make a harder effort", or you can say "work harder"!

I want somebody to let me know how should I do.


I want somebody to let me know how I should I do this. I want somebody to let me know how I should do this.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium