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Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui province, China. It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the center district covers 160 square kilometers. Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything special and I think it is only ranked as an ordinary city. The city’s transportation is very developed in my view because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station. Besides, it has at least four long distance bus stations. It is very convenient to go to any big city in China. For example, if you take planes to go to Beijing, it’s only an hour trip, and if you take the high speed railway, it only takes three hours. But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet. Fuyang West High speed railway station opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once. After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen. It has become bigger and more beautiful now. I love it.

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It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the center district covers 160 square kilometers.

It has become bigger and more beautiful now.

I love it.

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Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything special and I think it is only ranked as an ordinary city.

Besides, it has at least four long distance bus stations.

It is very convenient to go to any big city in China.

After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen.

It has become bigger and more beautiful now.

I love it.

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Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui province, China.


Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui pProvince, China. Fuyang is my hometown and it is in Anhui Province, China.

Fuyang is my hometown and it is located in Anhui province, China. Fuyang is my hometown and it is located in Anhui province, China.

It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the center district covers 160 square kilometers.


It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the centeral district covers 160 square kilometers. It has an urban population of 1.6 million and the central district covers 160 square kilometers.

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Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything special and I think it is only ranked as an ordinary city.


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Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything special and I think itthat stands out and is conly ranked assidered an ordinary city. Among all prefecture cities in China, it doesn’t have anything that stands out and is considered an ordinary city.

The city’s transportation is very developed in my view because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station.


The city’s transportation is very developed in my viewopinion because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station. The city’s transportation is very developed in my opinion because it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinary railway station.

TIn my view, the city’s transportation system is very developed in my view because, as it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an ordinregulary railway station. In my view, the city’s transportation system is very developed, as it has an airport, a high speed railway station and an regular railway station.

Besides, it has at least four long distance bus stations.


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It is very convenient to go to any big city in China.


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It is very convenient to go to any big city in China today. It is very convenient to go to any big city in China today.

For example, if you take planes to go to Beijing, it’s only an hour trip, and if you take the high speed railway, it only takes three hours.


For example, if you take a planes to go to Beijing, it’s only an hour trip, and if you take the high speed railway, it only takes three hours. For example, if you take a plane to go to Beijing, it’s only an hour trip, and if you take the high speed railway, it only takes three hours.

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But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet.


But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet. But the only disadvantage is that it hasn't had any international flights yet.

This sentence is fine but I think this conveys your meaning better: But the only disadvantage is that it doesn't offer any international flights yet.

But tThe only disadvantage is that it hasn'we have is that Fuyang does not hadve any international flights yet. The only disadvantage we have is that Fuyang does not have any international flights yet.

Fuyang West High speed railway station opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once.


Fuyang West High sSpeed rRailway sStation opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once. Fuyang West High Speed Railway Station opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it.

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Fuyang West High speed railway station opened on the 1st of last October, but I haven’t ever taken it once. not taken a train from there yet. Fuyang West High speed railway station opened on the 1st of October, but I have not taken a train from there yet.

After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen.


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After all, Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen. Fuyang is my hometown and I have lived here since I was fifteen.

It has become bigger and more beautiful now.


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I love it.


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