June 7, 2026
Which season is your favorite and why?
I have to say summer is my absolute favorite.
I'm a total beach person—growing up in Taiwan.
Every summer vacation I drive to the coast.
I love everything about it: cold iced mango juice after walking in the sun, staying up late with friends to watch fireworks on the beach, and getting a soft tan after a day out.
Even sudden summer rainstorms are fun—you just hide under a bustop and wait for it to pass, and then the whole city smells like jasmine.
It's just full of energy and good memories, how can you not love it?
我必须说，夏天是我最爱的季节。
我是个十足的海滩爱好者——在台湾长大。
每年暑假，我都会骑车去海边。
我喜欢这里的一切：晒太阳后喝冰镇的芒果汁，和朋友熬夜在海边看烟花，一天下来皮肤晒出古铜色。
就连突如其来的夏日暴雨也特别有趣——你只要躲在车站下面等它过去，然后整个城市都弥漫着茉莉花的味道。
这里充满活力，又洋溢着美好的回忆，怎能不爱呢？
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Which season is your favorite and why?
I have to say summer is my absolute favorite.
I'm a total beach person—g. Growing up in Taiwan, I went to the beach a lot.
I'm a total beach person. Growing up in Taiwan, I went to the beach a lot.
Curious_owl made a good correction here, and their example is a good one that I put above.
Every summer vacation, I drive to the coast. Every summer vacation, I drive to the coast.
I love everything about it: cold iced mango juice after walking in the sun,; staying up late with friends to watch fireworks on the beach,; and getting a soft tan after a day out.
I love everything about it: cold iced mango juice after walking in the sun; staying up late with friends to watch fireworks on the beach; and getting a soft tan after a day out.
You can use semicolons to present items in a list or series with commas or long items.
Another example: My trip took me across America to New York, New York; St. Louis, Missouri; and Los Angeles, California.
Even sudden summer rainstorms are fun—you just hide under a bustop and wait for it to pass, and then the whole city smells like jasmine.
It's just full of energy and good memories, how can you not love it?
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I've been working outside more as the summer has set in and it's quite enjoyable!
Which season is your favorite and why?
I have to say summer is my absolute favorite.
I'm a total beach person—growing up in Taiwan.
I'm a total beach person.
I don't think these 2 ideas are clearly linked, and the second half is not fully developed. It would sound better to split this into sentences, with more detail on your second idea.
Eg. "I'm a total beach person. Growing up in Taiwan, I went to the beach a lot."
Every summer vacation I drive to the coast.
I love everything about it: cold iced mango juice after walking in the sun, staying up late with friends to watch fireworks on the beach, and getting a soft tan after a day out.
Even sudden summer rainstorms are fun—you just hide under a bustop and wait for it to pass, and then the whole city smells like jasmine.
It's just full of energy and good memories, how can you not love it?
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I totally agree - summer is my favourite season as well :) Great writing!
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I have to say summer is my absolute favorite. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm a total beach person—growing up in Taiwan.
I'm a total beach person I don't think these 2 ideas are clearly linked, and the second half is not fully developed. It would sound better to split this into sentences, with more detail on your second idea. Eg. "I'm a total beach person. Growing up in Taiwan, I went to the beach a lot."
I'm a total beach person Curious_owl made a good correction here, and their example is a good one that I put above. |
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Every summer vacation I drive to the coast. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Every summer vacation, I drive to the coast. Every summer vacation, I drive to the coast. |
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I love everything about it: cold iced mango juice after walking in the sun, staying up late with friends to watch fireworks on the beach, and getting a soft tan after a day out. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I love everything about it: cold iced mango juice after walking in the sun You can use semicolons to present items in a list or series with commas or long items. Another example: My trip took me across America to New York, New York; St. Louis, Missouri; and Los Angeles, California. |
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Even sudden summer rainstorms are fun—you just hide under a bustop and wait for it to pass, and then the whole city smells like jasmine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's just full of energy and good memories, how can you not love it? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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