Week end in Brighton Weekend in Brighton

This week end, was my first week end atin Brighton, since my move with my host family. This weekend was my first weekend in Brighton, since my move with my host family.

This week end, was my first week end at Brighton, since my move with my host family. This weekend, was my first weekend at Brighton, since my move with my host family.

Weekend is one word. First was just a simple typo. 'since my move with my host family' this is correct if you and your host family all moved together to Brighton, but if it was just you going to your host family, it's more natural to say 'since moving in with my host family.'

We are arrived for 1 weeks ago. We are arrived 1 week ago.

With a new house, new school and new neighboours. With a new house, new school and new neighbours.

On sSaturday, i had started my day at eight am, with breakfasts and then i went ato my first pilates Llesson. On Saturday, i had started my day at eight am with breakfast and then i went to my first pilates lesson.

On sSaturday, iI had started my day at eight am, with breakfasts and iI went ato my first pPilates Llesson. On Saturday, I had started my day at eight am, with breakfast and I went to my first Pilates lesson.

A couple of capital letters needed changing. You can also write 8 am

WThere are i think 10 people there I think, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice. There are 10 people there I think, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice.

We are iI think, 10 people, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice. We are I think, 10 people, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice.

The lesson durlasted one hours. The lesson lasted one hour.

The lesson dured one hoursation was one hour. Or The lesson lasted for an hour. The lesson duration was one hour. Or The lesson lasted for an hour.

Your sentence is ok but sounds a little formal.

Then after thaht, i takesook a bus forto join a new friends, three aupairs, the first aupair was fFrench like me, the second is gGermain and the last Australian, thahtit's more easy for sher to speak english of course. Then after that, i took a bus to join a new friends, three aupairs, the first aupair was French like me, the second is German and the last Australian, it's more easy for her to speak english of course.

I'm a little bit confused on the last bit but I think this is what you meant.

We spocke and ate at the Brunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and iI ate a Bberry pancakes. We spoke and ate at the Brunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and I ate berry pancakes.

We spocke and ate at the Bbrunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and iI ate a Bberry pancakes. We spoke and ate at the brunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and I ate a berry pancake.

Just some spelling and capital letter changes

After the Brunch we going towent to do a little bit of shopping and we are goingwent in the Pub forand saw the match of six nation, England against France. After the Brunch we went to do a little bit of shopping and we went in the Pub and saw the match of six nation, England against France.

After the Bbrunch we going to do a little bit of shopping and we are going into the Ppub for sawto watch the match of six nations, England against France. After the brunch we going to do a little bit of shopping and we are going to the pub to watch the match of six nations, England against France.

ThaIt was a cool match and very close during all the match. It was a cool match and very close during all the match.

That was a cool match and it was very close during allthe whole match. That was a cool match and it was very close during the whole match.

The atmosphere in the pub arewas very friendly but i was for the fFrance of course, so unfortunately we have lost... The atmosphere in the pub was very friendly but i was for the France of course, so unfortunately we have lost...

The atmosphere in the pub arewas very friendly but iI was for the fsupporting France of course, sobut unfortunately we have lost... The atmosphere in the pub was very friendly but I was supporting France of course, but unfortunately we lost...

And my saturday finished like thisat. And my saturday finished like that.

And that's how my sSaturday finish like thised. And that's how my Saturday finished.

The sSunday iwass little bit rainy, so i walked untilalong the sea and i walked six kilometers. Sunday wass little bit rainy, so i walked along the sea and i walked six kilometers.

The sSunday is little bit rainy, so iI walked untilby the sea and iI walked six kilometeres. Sunday is little bit rainy, so I walked by the sea and I walked six kilometres.