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A bakery 1

There is a nice bakery in Yachiyodai station.

When I go to work, I get off this station.
I go past the bakery if I go to my office.

I usually buy a bread for my breakfast on my way to work.
I like Walnut bread which price is 200JPY.

I can get one point when I buy a bread.
And I collect 5points, it worth 50JPY.

This bakery have cafe in the shop. Some people eat them after buying breads.

However, I eat it befor work at my company's canteen.

The work starts from 9am , I arrive my office at 8:50am so I have to eat it for 5minutes.


八千代台駅にパン屋があります。
仕事に行く時、この駅でおります。
パン屋の脇を通り過ぎて仕事にいきます。

私はいつも朝食のパン1つをこのパン屋でかいます。1つ200円です。

パンを1つかうとポイントが1つもらえます。
5ポイント集めると50円割引してもらえます。

このパン屋の中にカフェがあります。
買ったパンをここで食べる事ができます。

私は買ったパンを仕事が始まる前に、会社の食堂でたべます。

会社に着くのは8時50分です。仕事は9時に始まります。 私は5分間で朝食のパンをたべます。

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A bakery 1

There is a nice bakery in Yachiyodai station.

I go past the bakery if I go to my office.

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A bakery 1

There is a nice bakery in Yachiyodai station.

A bakery 1

There is a nice bakery in Yachiyodai station.

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moumounorinori

Feb. 1, 2024

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I go past the bakery if I go to my office.

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A bakery 1

There is a nice bakery in Yachiyodai station.

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A bakery 1


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There is a nice bakery in Yachiyodai station.


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I go past the bakery if I go to my office.


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I usually buy a bread for my breakfast on my way to work.


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I like Walnut bread which price is 200JPY.


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This bakery have cafe in the shop.


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Some people eat them after buying breads.


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When I go to work, I get off this station.


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I can get one point when I buy a bread.


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And I collect 5points, it worth 50JPY.


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However, I eat it befor work at my company's canteen.


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The work starts from 9am , I arrive my office at 8:50am so I have to eat it for 5minutes.


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