April 23, 2026
My daily rutine is kind of tired but it's part of being adult. Everything starts at 5 am I wake up to do some excersise in my gym, it is not that big or with a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles. Well, after that I take a shower and I wake my daughter up so she can get ready for school. Meanwhile I cook her breakfast. Then I collect my dog's droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time and feed them their kibble. Now my daughter finished her breakfast, it's time to leave. The school is 5-minute away driving. When I go back home I have to rush to cook my breakfast because at 8 am starts my job meetings. I work from 8 to 15 then it's time to pick my daughter up from school. Most o f the week days we go to the supermarket to buy some food to cook the dinner, but some times we prefer to order food. I worked again from around 17 when we finished our dinner and I stop working around 20. Since my daughter is 8 years old I still help her to regulate the water temperature in the shower. After she finishes that I comb her hair and she's ready to go to bed. I tried to read an hour at least before go to bed. And I think that's it.
My daily routine My daily routine
routine is the correct spelling
My daily rutine is kind of tireding but it's part of being adult.
My daily rutine is kind of tiring but it's part of being adult.
Describing the day as tired sounds unnatural and it is hard for me to interpret what exactly you meant but I think saying the day is "tiring" is more accurate and portrays more how you are tired at the end of the day.
Everything starts at 5 am Everything starts at 5 am
I wake up to do some excerscise in my gym, it is not that big or with a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles.
I wake up to do some exercise in my gym, it is not that big or with a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles.
spelling correction.
The school is 5-minutes away driving. (or a 5-minute drive away) The school is 5-minutes away driving. (or a 5-minute drive away)
I work from 8 to 153 in the afternoon then it's time to pick my daughter up from school.
I work from 8 to 3 in the afternoon then it's time to pick my daughter up from school.
saying 15 sounds unnatural to me but it may be a cultural difference. this is true for anything above 12 really.
I triedy to read an hour at least before go to bed.
I try to read an hour at least before go to bed.
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overall quite good, just some minor expression mistakes but most of the meaning is easily conveyed
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My Daily Routine
In English, each word in a title is capitalized except for words like "and," "a/an/the," "to," "in," etc.
My daily routine is kind of tireding, but ithat's part of being adult.
My daily routine is kind of tiring, but that's part of being adult.
The routine isn't tired itself, it makes you tired.
Comma added before but because they're "independent clauses" (could each stand alone as valid sentences).
Everything starts at 5 am. Everything starts at 5 am.
I wake up to do some excerscise {in my gym, it is not that big or with| at the} gym. It's not that big and doesn't have a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles.
I wake up to do some exercise {in my | at the} gym. It's not that big and doesn't have a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles.
"In my" would be appropriate if you literally own a gym/have one in your home, otherwise you would use "at the."
I get what you're expressing with "or with a lot of machines," but it's not a very natural phrasing, and I can't think of a way to rephrase it that maintains your "it's not [property] or [property]" structure.
Well, aAfter that, I {take a} shower and I wake my daughter up so she can get ready for school.
After that, I {take a} shower and wake my daughter up so she can get ready for school
You could remove "take a" and still have a grammatically correct sentence, but it's not wrong or unnatural to have it there—just an option.
Meanwhile I cook her breakfast.
while I cook her breakfast.
I would add this onto the end of the last sentence for flow, but you could also leave it on its own with a comma after "meanwhile."
Then{,} I collect my dog's droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time, and feed them their kibble. Then{,} I collect my dog's droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time, and feed them their kibble.
A comma is typically added after starting a sentence with "then" to add a natural pause after the transition, but it's not grammatically incorrect to not have one.
I would recommend adding a comma before the last list item. It's not grammatically required, but in my experience, most people do, and it reads weird without one. Like the comma after "then," this adds a brief pause to your writing that would be there naturally if you were speaking.
NowOnce my daughter {has finished | finishes} her breakfast, it's time to leave.
Once my daughter {has finished | finishes} her breakfast, it's time to leave.
Since you're giving us an overview of your routine rather than explaining it to us as it happens, "once" is more appropriate.
The school is a 5-minute away drivingdrive away.
The school is a 5-minute drive away.
When I goet back home, I have to rush to cook my breakfast because at 8 am starts my job meetingsmy work meetings start at 8 {am}.
When I get back home, I have to rush to cook my breakfast because my work meetings start at 8 {am}.
I work from 8 to 153, then it's time to pick my daughter up from school.
I work from 8 to 3, then it's time to pick my daughter up from school.
I can't speak to how 24-hour time is used in other English-speaking parts of the world, but in American English you would use the 12-hour time. You could also add "am/pm," but this is often not necessary unless there's ambiguity or you want to be very explicit.
Most o f the week days we go to the supermarket to buy some food to cook theingredients for dinner, but some times we prefer to order foodit.
Most week days we go to the supermarket to buy ingredients for dinner, but sometimes we prefer to order it.
I worked again from around 175, when we finished our dinner and I stop working, until around 208.
I work again from around 5, when we finish our dinner, until around 8.
"When we finish our dinner" is an interjection that should be set apart by commas, em-dashes, or parentheses:
Em-dash: [...] around 5—when we finish our dinner—until [...]
Parenthesis: [...] around 5 (when we finish our dinner) until [...]
Commas are probably the most common way of doing this. I'm personally a big fan of em-dashes, but they're more informal and pretty uncommon. Parentheses are also common, but more informal.
Since my daughter is 8 years old, I still help her to regulate the water temperature in the shower.
Since my daughter is 8 years old, I still help her regulate the water temperature in the shower.
After she finishes that{showering | her shower}, I comb her hair and she's ready {to go to | for} bed.
After she finishes {showering | her shower}, I comb her hair and she's ready {to go to | for} bed.
I triedy to read an houfor at least an hour before going to bed.,
I try to read for at least an hour before going to bed,
Aand I think that's it.
and I think that's it.
I would join this to the end of the last sentence to avoid starting a sentence with "and." Alternatively, you could keep this a standalone sentence and just remove "and."
Feedback
Great job! Punctuation and phrasing will come with time; my biggest advice is to pay attention to consistency of verb conjugations. In cases like this, where you're talking about actions that aren't connected to a particular time (past, present, future), you'll use the simple present.
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My Daily Routine
My daily routine is kind of tireding, but it'’s part of being an adult.
My daily routine is kind of tiring, but it’s part of being an adult.
Everything starts at 5 am.m.
Everything starts at 5 a.m.
I wake up to do some excerscise in my gym, i. It is not that big or equipped with a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles.
I wake up to do some exercise in my gym. It is not that big or equipped with a lot of machines, but I have what I need to work all the muscles.
Well, after that, I take a shower and I wake my daughter up so she can get ready for school.
Well, after that, I take a shower and wake my daughter up so she can get ready for school.
Meanwhile, I cook her breakfast. Meanwhile, I cook her breakfast.
Then I collect my dog'’s droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time, and feed them their kibble.
Then I collect my dog’s droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time, and feed them their kibble.
Now my daughter has finished her breakfast, so it'’s time to leave.
Now my daughter has finished her breakfast, so it’s time to leave.
The school is a 5-minute away drivingdrive away.
The school is a 5-minute drive away.
When I go back home, I have to rush to cookprepare my breakfast because at 8 am starts my job meetingsmy work meetings start at 8 a.m.
When I go back home, I have to rush to prepare my breakfast because my work meetings start at 8 a.m.
I work from 8 to 15, then it'’s time to pick my daughter up from school.
I work from 8 to 15, then it’s time to pick my daughter up from school.
Most o f the week days, we go to the supermarket to buy some food to cook thefor dinner, but some times we prefer to order food.
Most of the weekdays, we go to the supermarket to buy some food for dinner, but sometimes we prefer to order food.
I start workeding again from around 17 when, after we finished our dinner, and I stop working around 20.
I start working again around 17, after we finish our dinner, and I stop working around 20.
Since my daughter is 8 years old, I still help her to regulate the water temperature in the shower.
Since my daughter is 8 years old, I still help her regulate the water temperature in the shower.
After she finishes that, I comb her hair, and she'’s ready to go to bed.
After she finishes, I comb her hair, and she’s ready to go to bed.
I triedy to read an houfor at least an hour before going to bed.
I try to read for at least an hour before going to bed.
And I think that'’s it.
And I think that’s it.
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My daily routine is kind of tir The routine isn't tired itself, it makes you tired. Comma added before but because they're "independent clauses" (could each stand alone as valid sentences).
My daily rutine is kind of tir Describing the day as tired sounds unnatural and it is hard for me to interpret what exactly you meant but I think saying the day is "tiring" is more accurate and portrays more how you are tired at the end of the day. |
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Well, after that I take a shower and I wake my daughter up so she can get ready for school.
Well, after that, I take a shower and
You could remove "take a" and still have a grammatically correct sentence, but it's not wrong or unnatural to have it there—just an option. |
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Meanwhile I cook her breakfast. Meanwhile, I cook her breakfast. Meanwhile, I cook her breakfast.
I would add this onto the end of the last sentence for flow, but you could also leave it on its own with a comma after "meanwhile." |
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Then I collect my dog's droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time and feed them their kibble.
Then I collect my dog Then{,} I collect my dog's droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time, and feed them their kibble. Then{,} I collect my dog's droppings, wash the patio where they stay most of the time, and feed them their kibble. A comma is typically added after starting a sentence with "then" to add a natural pause after the transition, but it's not grammatically incorrect to not have one. I would recommend adding a comma before the last list item. It's not grammatically required, but in my experience, most people do, and it reads weird without one. Like the comma after "then," this adds a brief pause to your writing that would be there naturally if you were speaking. |
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Now my daughter finished her breakfast, it's time to leave.
Now my daughter has finished her breakfast, so it
Since you're giving us an overview of your routine rather than explaining it to us as it happens, "once" is more appropriate. |
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The school is 5-minute away driving.
The school is a 5-minute
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When I go back home I have to rush to cook my breakfast because at 8 am starts my job meetings.
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I work from 8 to 15 then it's time to pick my daughter up from school.
I work from 8 to 15, then it
I work from 8 to I can't speak to how 24-hour time is used in other English-speaking parts of the world, but in American English you would use the 12-hour time. You could also add "am/pm," but this is often not necessary unless there's ambiguity or you want to be very explicit.
I work from 8 to saying 15 sounds unnatural to me but it may be a cultural difference. this is true for anything above 12 really. |
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Most o f the week days we go to the supermarket to buy some food to cook the dinner, but some times we prefer to order food.
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I worked again from around 17 when we finished our dinner and I stop working around 20.
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Since my daughter is 8 years old I still help her to regulate the water temperature in the shower.
Since my daughter is 8 years old, I still help her
Since my daughter is 8 years old, I still help her |
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After she finishes that I comb her hair and she's ready to go to bed.
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I tried to read an hour at least before go to bed.
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And I think that's it.
And I think that
I would join this to the end of the last sentence to avoid starting a sentence with "and." Alternatively, you could keep this a standalone sentence and just remove "and." |
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