July 25, 2022
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I have been living in the present city for about 5 years. The city, Nanjing,China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. In Dec 1937, Japan Army captured the city and killed above 360,000 including soldiers and ordinary people.
Eighty years later, on one temple located on the site of massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed and worshiped the main war criminals who organized the above massacre, hoping through which to ease her anxiety and insomnia incurred by watching the monument of massacre, which immediately caused a nationwide outcry after being exposed to the press.
Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy. I guess it's against all the original belief of any religions.
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I have been living in the prescurrent city for about 5 years.
I have been living in the current city for about 5 years.
The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949.
Eighty years later, oin one temple located on the site of massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed and worshiped the main war criminals who organized the above massacre, hoping through which to ease her anxiety and insomnia incurred by watching the monument of massacre, which immediately caused a nationwide outcry after being exposed to the press.
Eighty years later, in one temple located on the site of massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed and worshiped the main war criminals who organized the above massacre, hoping through which to ease her anxiety and insomnia incurred by watching the monument of massacre, which immediately caused a nationwide outcry after being exposed to the press.
Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy. Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy.
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For a title, we usually capitalize the first letter of important words.
I ha've been living in the presmy current city for about 5 years.
I've been living in my current city for about 5 years.
This sounds more natural in the US.
The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949.
In Dec 1937, the Japanese Imperial Army captured the city and killed abover 360,000 people including soldiers and ordinary people.
In Dec 1937, the Japanese Imperial Army captured the city and killed over 360,000 people including soldiers and ordinary people.
Eighty years later, onat one temple located on the site of the massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed and worshipedher sons in the name of the main war criminals who organized the above massacre, hoping through which to ease her anxiety and insomnia which she incurred by watchobserving the monument of the massacre, which. This immediately caused a nationwide outcry after beingit was exposed to the press.
Eighty years later, at one temple located on the site of the massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed her sons in the name of the main war criminals who organized the massacre, hoping to ease her anxiety and insomnia which she incurred by observing the monument of the massacre. This immediately caused a nationwide outcry after it was exposed to the press.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say so this is my best guess.
Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy was met with outrage. Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy was met with outrage.
Your original sentence is a sentence fragment so I tried to make it a complete sentence.
I guess it's against all the original belief of any religionseverything people believe.
I guess it's against everything people believe.
This sounds more natural in the US.
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July 25, 2022
Eighty years later, onat one temple located on the site of the massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed and worshipedher sons in the name of the main war criminals who organized the above massacre, hoping through which to ease her anxiety and insomnia which she incurred by watchobserving the monument of the massacre, which. This immediately caused a nationwide outcry after beingit was exposed to the press.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say so this is my best guess.
Sorry for inconvenience caused. Let me explain it more. The infamous Yasukuni Shrine in Japan worships all war criminals committing unforgivable crimes during the WW2, which was once set fire by a brave Chinese in 2011. The man also set fire on the Japanese's embassy on South Korea 13 days after his done at Japan. The nurse, as a Chinese, observed the monument of the massacre and got extreme anxiety fearing those dead devils, I have never been to this monument because it's too scaring and definitely leave shadow in your mind. So she made a stupid decision to worship them in the temple as Japanese do in Yasukuni Shrine to ease her fear. She didn't sacrifice her sons. She just worship them in that temple which is in a very sensitive location. We are angry that as a Chinese, she is expected to show her anger to those invaders instead of her fear, let alone worshipping those devails in exchange for their mercy. If those guys dare to invade us again, we shall use our fist to hit the shit out of them.
July 25, 2022
Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy was met with outrage.
Your original sentence is a sentence fragment so I tried to make it a complete sentence.
Thanks for correction done for me. Let me explain it more. I made a metaphorical expression i.e. worshipping those devils in temple so that they won't haunt in your dream is just useless. The principle of Buddhism also doesn't mean to persuade people to get relief by worshipping deveils in temples. Devails seduce you to sacrifice your sons so that you will get safety. Should you obey their instructions, you would be doomed to lose everything.
July 25, 2022
Sorry for inconvenience caused. Let me explain it more. The infamous Yasukuni Shrine in Japan worships all war criminals committing unforgivable crimes during the WW2, which was once set fire by a brave Chinese in 2011. The man also set fire on the Japanese's embassy on South Korea 13 days after his done at Japan. The nurse, as a Chinese, observed the monument of the massacre and got extreme anxiety fearing those dead devils, I have never been to this monument because it's too scaring and definitely leave shadow in your mind. So she made a stupid decision to worship them in the temple as Japanese do in Yasukuni Shrine to ease her fear. She didn't sacrifice her sons. She just worship them in that temple which is in a very sensitive location. We are angry that as a Chinese, she is expected to show her anger to those invaders instead of her fear, let alone worshipping those devails in exchange for their mercy. If those guys dare to invade us again, we shall use our fist to hit the shit out of them.
ah, okay. I think I understand now. Then you're sentence could be something like this.
Eighty years later, at the shrine in Japan which worships Japanese war criminals, a Chinese nurse prayed to the war criminals who organized the massacre, hoping to ease her anxiety and insomnia which she incurred by observing the monument of the massacre. This behavior immediately caused a nationwide outcry after it was exposed to the press.
July 25, 2022
Thanks for correction done for me. Let me explain it more. I made a metaphorical expression i.e. worshipping those devils in temple so that they won't haunt in your dream is just useless. The principle of Buddhism also doesn't mean to persuade people to get relief by worshipping deveils in temples. Devails seduce you to sacrifice your sons so that you will get safety. Should you obey their instructions, you would be doomed to lose everything.
Okay, thanks for the explanation! Then the sentence could be like this:
Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy is useless.
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Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy is pointless.
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The city, Nanjing,China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. The city, Nanjing, China, used to be the Capital of China before 1949. |
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Eighty years later, on one temple located on the site of massacre, a Chinese nurse sacrificed and worshiped the main war criminals who organized the above massacre, hoping through which to ease her anxiety and insomnia incurred by watching the monument of massacre, which immediately caused a nationwide outcry after being exposed to the press.
Eighty years later, I'm not sure what you're trying to say so this is my best guess.
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Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy. Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy was met with outrage. Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy was met with outrage. Your original sentence is a sentence fragment so I tried to make it a complete sentence. Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy. Sacrificing your sons to cater to the devil and beg for their mercy. |
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I guess it's against all the original belief of any religions.
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